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Lake Before Dawn

ghosts drifting away... freshwater lake ... before dawn ... greetings ... morning sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/27/2018 8:30:00 PM
Am transported. (thank you, I needed to get away)
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Date: 8/26/2018 9:38:00 PM
Oh how beautiful. Your imagery really comes alive in this stunning haiku, Gershon. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 10:14:00 PM
Always appreciate your eloquent encouragement, Susan. Thank you and best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 5:49:00 PM
superb imagery GW!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 5:58:00 PM
Many thanks, my friend! ~ gw
Date: 8/26/2018 5:10:00 PM
i love the "ghosts drifting away" line, gershon. i know exactly what you mean. well done!
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Date: 8/26/2018 4:18:00 PM
gorgeous!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thanks for making my day, Andrea

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