Lake Before Dawn

ghosts drifting away... freshwater lake ... before dawn ... greetings ... morning sun

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/27/2018 8:30:00 PM

Am transported. (thank you, I needed to get away)

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2018 9:38:00 PM

Oh how beautiful. Your imagery really comes alive in this stunning haiku, Gershon. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 10:14:00 PM

Always appreciate your eloquent encouragement, Susan. Thank you and best wishes, Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2018 5:49:00 PM

superb imagery GW!:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 5:58:00 PM

Many thanks, my friend! ~ gw

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/26/2018 5:10:00 PM

i love the "ghosts drifting away" line, gershon. i know exactly what you mean. well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2018 4:18:00 PM

gorgeous!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 4:30:00 PM

Thanks for making my day, Andrea