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Lake

Depression, like the pits and ditches of my heart, With clear water, like that of blood, does life impart; Adorning the environs like valued jewels, Dear lake, how clearly clean cool water in you pools...! Treasures of art, architecture and ancient tales, Cultural congruence is hidden in your veils; My valor, values, and vibrant vivacity, Draw their vitality from your mortality...! Within your chilly waters I cheerfully play, Like an elephant or hippopotamus stay; Within your womb are ponds, streams, springs and glacial mass, Serenity, calmness, and composure en-mass...! I swim, row boat, aqua cycle, and kayaking, I refresh my bored life with soul-skiing, sailing; You bring within me optimism, love for nature, Capable, confident, and love for each creature...! How I wish to visit countries highest in lakes! I desire to relish these and forget my aches; Tracing, transfiguring, and transforming, our drives, O lake! Perpetually you prosper our lives...!!! 16 March 2023 Writing Challenge - 'L' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Rhymes Checked At: Rhymezone. Syllables Checked At: Howmanysyllables.

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:13:00 PM
Christuraj, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/17/2023 8:37:00 AM
Extremely well done, Alex. Congrats on your win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/17/2023 7:36:00 AM
Love this ode to lakes Alex. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/16/2023 9:32:00 AM
Great for the contest, Alex, I enjoyed reading. Hugs eve
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/16/2023 10:03:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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