Lake

Lake of fire in hell , It will be  residence of  Evildoers 
All demons swim rapidly,exhausted squawking for help
Keeping  by God ,furiously but no tactic to 
Escape from LAKE of fire,throbbing life in Fire forever 

March 15/2023
Writting for contest sponsored by Constance la France 
Theme chosen: LAKE

...Third 
    place
    Win 
        in 
      the 
   Contest...

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 3:15:00 PM

Alfonso, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 4/4/2023 9:56:00 AM

I enjoyed this contest Thank you for keep visiting my page and commenting .... Your most welcome. Constance.

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/17/2023 3:50:00 PM

A well-crafted poem, Alfonso, Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/17/2023 7:23:00 PM

Thank you for your compliments and visitation on my page. Your reading and comment mean A lot to me. You are welcome

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/17/2023 7:40:00 AM

A different take on 'lake' Alfonso. Unique. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win! :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/17/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much for your compliments , dear Linda. Happy as you enjoyed this poem.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/14/2023 9:15:00 PM

Just by reading it, makes me wanna make sure I’m good with God. I sure don’t want to be part that Lake fire. Lol. Good one, Alfanso :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris
Date: 3/14/2023 11:38:00 PM

Yeah... Time still. Thank you so much for your compliment. You are welcome, Fin :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 3/14/2023 7:55:00 PM

Lake of fire... It is not a place to wish Very hot place ever seen or felt.