Laika

Into the solar system
Outreaching myself
Intense grief, mourning
Into cake and wedding dress

Galvanized poorly, the rust
About to topple into ochre
Coated stardust glittering
As we discover the truth

Not enough good, oh but for better
For worse, for years, for a fool
Like me and her, a mirror image
A replacement, a damnation

Creeping over stocking tops
There is not enough bleach in the world
To coat the filthy soul you smuggle
Into orbit, my anger now exceeding

The speed of light, the Titanic
To the iceberg, one way trip
A government secret, a conspiracy
Anything at all to wipe away your guilt

And stardust glittering on her face
Leaving retched little Laika to
Smother in the agony of ignorance
Huddle with me for precious warmth

How I could set a man on fire
The tongue is sharp, cutting through
The web of lies, deceit, conterfeit
Forgiveness plagiarized in pamphlets

Set across the universe, the guilt
You should be feeling, burning up in Betelgeuse
Oh for heavens and constellations spell it out
Every dog has their day, but some draw the shortest of the straws

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/27/2009 7:40:00 PM
I wish you sweeter things to inspire your marvelous pen. "Forgiveness plagiarized in pamphlets" loved this line. Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2009 9:09:00 PM
I love the ending especially... but this is really well written, Ladeeez. The fourth stanza is also really intense (haha, gotta love the intense stuff) and the repeated star imagery works so well... KCOG =] Daffodil
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:58:00 PM
oh poor Laika! such wonderful verse! Nathaniel! great work! jim
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