L'Affaire

Can it possibly be
    She never took me seriously
  Insouciant to the last
    The farewell lightning-fast  

  A grenade takes ten counts to unload
    A stick of dynamite awaits its wick to explode
  But faster than a hummingbird beats its wings
    A whirlwind tore through my heartstrings  

  Gone in a trice, the curtains barely fluttered
    Out the window, nor hint nor reflection
  On the street, neither indication, nor allusion ~
    How to end an affair that escapes its conclusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hawkins Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:55 PM
That type of woman is not a good catch for anyone. If she keeps on running from man to man any man worth his salt will give up the chase. Good Riddance.
Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 6:59 PM
She may not be a good catch, but the worm on the end of the hook is bug-eyed!
Slaughter Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:56 AM
I know it makes me sound somewhat callous, G, but sometimes a quick ending is better than one that is dragged out to the bitter end.
Wolf Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 6:59 PM
I hear you, Jim. Best to get on with life. There are more fish in the sea, as they say.
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 12:12 PM
I don't believe she deserves such a poetic lament, but if she does return repentant and contrite, sing Cry Me A River to her! All's fair in love and war! Robert
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Well, that'll be quite a boon. lol.
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 9:17 AM
It doesn't take much to frighten a dove:) Another fine write from your golden pen, GW. (son of a sage) That is your new moniker from me. LOL
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 7:07 PM
'Son of a Sage' is showing his age... Thanks, Daniel
Lawless Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 4:01 AM
bit premature to be sure
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