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L'Affaire

Can it possibly be She never took me seriously Insouciant to the last The farewell lightning-fast A grenade takes ten counts to unload A stick of dynamite awaits its wick to explode But faster than a hummingbird beats its wings A whirlwind tore through my heartstrings Gone in a trice, the curtains barely fluttered Out the window, nor hint nor reflection On the street, neither indication, nor allusion ~ How to end an affair that escapes its conclusion

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Date: 3/15/2023 4:55:00 PM
That type of woman is not a good catch for anyone. If she keeps on running from man to man any man worth his salt will give up the chase. Good Riddance.
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Date: 3/15/2023 6:59:00 PM
She may not be a good catch, but the worm on the end of the hook is bug-eyed!
Date: 3/15/2023 10:56:00 AM
I know it makes me sound somewhat callous, G, but sometimes a quick ending is better than one that is dragged out to the bitter end.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2023 6:59:00 PM
I hear you, Jim. Best to get on with life. There are more fish in the sea, as they say.
Date: 3/14/2023 12:12:00 PM
I don't believe she deserves such a poetic lament, but if she does return repentant and contrite, sing Cry Me A River to her! All's fair in love and war! Robert
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/14/2023 7:08:00 PM
Well, that'll be quite a boon. lol.
Date: 3/14/2023 9:17:00 AM
It doesn't take much to frighten a dove:) Another fine write from your golden pen, GW. (son of a sage) That is your new moniker from me. LOL
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/14/2023 7:07:00 PM
'Son of a Sage' is showing his age... Thanks, Daniel
Date: 3/14/2023 4:01:00 AM
bit premature to be sure
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