Ladybug's Refreshment

One 
pure dew
drop rests on
a tall blade of
grass occupied by 
a ladybug,
who takes a
dainty
sip.

3/22/12
For Joann Grisetti's Ninette contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Buhain-Baello Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Concise, eloquent and beautiful.
Prabhu Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 7:51 PM
well expressed... brought out the essence of the entire process really well..........congrats on the placement in Joann's contest..........~sashi
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 6:00 PM
This is my favorite.! congrats to you. BG
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Ninette" contest Kim. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:05 AM
Fine write,Kim. Congratulations on your win..
Burch Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:21 PM
:) oh what a picture!!Congratulations Kim on your win!! Adorable...love it!!Big Huggsss,love~deb
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 7:55 PM
congrats Kim on a terrificd win with this cute Ninette luv..
Johnson Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 7:10 PM
How sweet it is. Congratulations Kim. Love, Joyce
Ball Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 7:09 PM
A very sweet piec e here Kim. I love the lady bugs in my garden and look forward to their return every year. Thanks so much for your comments on my latest post. So glad you like it. God Bless, JB
Bauer Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 7:35 AM
this is charming! good luck in the contest!
Burch Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 1:06 AM
Well done Kim...very visual...Good luck in the contest my friend! big hug~deb
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 22, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Good one, Kim! I love the image you created. A winner for sure. Blessings, Rhonda
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