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Lady Winter

Lingering gracefully though Heaven's gold She tosses white flakes of eve that grow cold; Twigs stretching their arms to the tinseled sky In a chill of breeze as she walks nearby. Signalling her presence in fine,laced gown Her gems are rubies and pearls on a crown, In hues delightful, as blushed nights reveal A December glow, in wintertime's zeal. Her scent quite distinct, of peat and wood smoke Mellow as leaf mold yet burnished as oak, Her gaze rising like snow, gentle then rough Glossy as chestnuts, abundant enough. While she smiles, the fireplace her hand bears Tumbles of stillness on whispered prayers... She pauses briefly, then turning her face Abandons frothed charms to Season's embrace. ------------ Write Me A Winter Poem Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings By nette onclaud New Poem ~ 11/15/2015

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Date: 11/25/2015 3:56:00 PM
Love your description of winter, Nette! Beautifully written! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/20/2015 8:04:00 AM
I enjoyed this so very much, congrats on top placement! :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:39:00 AM
Another wonderful work, congrats nette...hugs
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:19:00 AM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS Nette! hugs, I echo my words down, so pleased! h~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/20/2015 12:17:00 AM
Ah this is so delightful dear nette! Congrats on ur first place win!
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Date: 11/19/2015 11:12:00 PM
Wonderful win nette congratulations!!
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Date: 11/19/2015 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:13:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/19/2015 2:53:00 PM
Awesome piece Netty and congrats on your win. Well deserved! Love, Rahy
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Date: 11/19/2015 1:25:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, well done especially since I don't think they have winters where you live...
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Date: 11/19/2015 12:37:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2015 9:02:00 AM
Nette, you are SO good at evoking the senses in your poetry. This is beautiful. I especially love the image of the "tinseled sky" and "frothed charms."
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Date: 11/16/2015 7:45:00 PM
Nette, definitely a winner for me, pretty..! hope you doing great!hugs~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/16/2015 6:25:00 PM
wow, what beautiful personification. An extra creative take on winter. I'm sure Constance will love this one in her contest.
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Date: 11/15/2015 5:10:00 PM
A really beautiful poem that just exceeded the requirements for a sonnet form. Personification and strong appeal to the senses combine to make this a valid contender for top stop in this contest. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/15/2015 12:38:00 PM
There are poems and there are poems of great poetry; this is the latter as are most of your writings. There is a natural beauty and innate wisdom that touches one before fleeting and blending in to air ... CayCay
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Date: 11/14/2015 11:56:00 PM
"Her scent quite distinct, of peat and wood smoke Mellow as leaf mold yet burnished as oak," these lines really had me smelling the smoke and feeling the cold outside Nette. This is a real beaut! It should shine in the contest my friend.
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:37:00 PM
Oh, Wow! This is so amazing and wonderful my dearest friend, Nette! One of the best winter poems I've read this morning. I love it so much. You write magnificently as always! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your lovely visit and comments on one of my poems. I'll be back to read more pls. I've to sign off now coz it's time for mass at our schlchurch. Pls. read my other replies on my page if you've time. TYTYSM and Best wishes! Miss you! love lots and hugs,Leonora
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:12:00 PM
By far, this is my favorite entry. The opening lines immediately painted a majestic wintry scene which I often overlook. With metaphors, alliteration, and personification, you've managed to pen a stunning poem!
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Date: 11/14/2015 1:07:00 PM
- A December glow, in winter coat ..... beautiful, Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2015 12:14:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful imagery as ever Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2015 12:13:00 PM
The way you float your images makes winter an incredibly charming lady. Amazed by the use of personification too!
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Date: 11/14/2015 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely beyond any singing of it,your prowess shows nette,Indeed she is quite a mistress.
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