Justin Bordner Poet Ode

Lady of My Life

Her heartbeat echoes like a love moan in my mind,
summoning centuries of refined romanticism soulfully enshrined,
the contralto of her voice a fillatio upon the cock of my consciousness,
through her eyes I see that mystery is the Mistress of meaning beyond regress,
my manly mouth serenades & suckles the rosy pussy of her prophecy, homage cunnilingus,
revelations irresistible in their heretical invigorations excite our imaginations
as we fornicate a ferocious forsooth soothsaying love's reincarnations,
a vignette of virility forthcoming from fate's far side fortifications
presents a primal promise in paranormal inceptions,

Premonitions primitive in heart heat paint
streak the skin of our desire to design an indigenous heaven,
flesh tones warm fast and feral revealing a vitality of spirituality that tongues detonate,
the Universe blooms into a Multiverse as she spreads her spell of star spice scintillation
onto my ripened body rendering her rites fertile in rich freight, 
within the brain's wildfire I feel her unction,

Becoming the shaman of our secret skin ceremony
I invoke the spirit of solar youth into veinage voracious for passion's patronage,
sanctifying the unifying lust between the bodily and ghostly unlicensed liberty,
shadow temple of temptation gives offering of blood and song from astral page,
death dream extremes fire hot ejaculation of divine vindication into cosmogony
as she and I have won our now with a win over age,

My Love Muse is more than a woman
she is a savage seduction and a sacred sweetness,
a Goddess of her own Cause...a lover known as Poetess,
her name changes from lifetime to lifetime, yet she is always beauty shown -

J.A.B.

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David William Breidenthal May 28, 2020 at 4:50 PM So sensual and brilliant :) -JWE Justin Bordner May 28, 2020 at 6:01 PM As is every star...J.A.B. David William Breidenthal May 28, 2020 at 4:51 PM I have just noticed that I posted another comment years ago lol but I absolutely liked this one. Very passionate and blissful as always.

Kp Nunez September 11, 2015 at 11:17 AM "My Love Muse is more than a woman she is a savage seduction and a sacred sweetness" encapsulates for me the essence of this write. I just love the power and beauty of love and passion that can give birth to such alluring poetry...total enchantment for me... Justin Bordner September 11, 2015 at 7:33 PM Thank you for leading my heart back to this poem of love divine Kim, I needed to feel this magic tonight...the love we have for eachother is a new fire in the old sky of Love...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker December 13, 2014 at 11:43 PM Justin, a very passionate illustration illuminated. I enjoyed reading this piece. Rated 7 because love the way you thrill seek and of course, written superlatively. Verlena Justin Bordner December 15, 2014 at 6:16 PM Climaxing on the peak of Thrill Seek is what she and I achieve through the promise of pure passion, a love eruption all our own Verlena. We are love rebels in extreme awakening. Thank you for the high praise Verlena...J.A.B.

Paul Callus December 2, 2014 at 2:57 PM Hi Justin! I try to imagine your Muse....her looks, her tone of voice, the way her eyes look, plead, command...She must be something really special who has the power to bring you to such heights of poetical expression. You are capable of turning passion into sacred beauty, molding with vigour every word that you use. In your hands poetic tools never go to waste. Well done. // paul Justin Bordner December 3, 2014 at 2:48 AM My Love Muse looks like pure temptation, her voice a secret thrill, her eyes plead for love and they command respect. She makes my passion dynamic Paul. Thank you for seeing the sacred in my poetry. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian November 29, 2014 at 11:19 PM Justin...back to thank you for my win on Where Gladiators Fought. Thank you for inspiring that write in me. Thank you for honoring me with a win. I'm touched...beyond words. Teary eyed....It is such a sweet sweet victory... One of the sweetest ever...Thank you. I see you as a gladiator....a warrior who knows the taste of victory...who fights for life and love and wins. :) In my mind's eye....I see you also as an eagle...fierce and strong. The one you love is a lucky woman! Eileen Manassian November 30, 2014 at 1:30 AM :) I smile when I sometimes read posts by older poets here to some young poetess saying...if only he was younger and unmarried, he would track that poetess down and never let her go. Well, here's the thing...if I were unmarried and younger....I'd turn warrior for you! ;) The Lady of your Life better be thankful because I can be a tough opponent. ;) Had to get that off my chest. All the best to you, my dear. Thanks again! Justin Bordner November 30, 2014 at 1:21 AM Eileen, your passionate intellect, youthful femininity, and studious soul have produced a portfolio of poetry that merits the adoration and study of poets and academics for as long as the craft of Poetry remains the Art of heroic heart. Your words of raw spirit and intense intelligence show all of us how to cry, bleed, fight, survive and love with dignity. I'm honored to be touched by your heart & genius Beloved Poetess...Justin

Charmaine Chircop November 29, 2014 at 10:53 PM My love muse is more than a woman.She is a savage seduction and a sacred sweetness.I really really liked these liness.What a way to describe your love muses.She definitely tickles your senses in mysterious and beautiful ways Justin.Lovely!Charma Justin Bordner November 30, 2014 at 1:37 AM There exists a Temple of tender tissue and eager love in my heart for her, a home for the song of her spirit, a beat for the beauty of her meanings Charma. She is a terrific tickler, an awesome power. Thank you for the beautiful visit Charma...J.A.B.

Nette Onclaud November 27, 2014 at 9:54 AM the physical and aural energy of this piece combines the real expression of love in all its realms--- earthy, mental, and spiritual, Justin... fantastic work.. huggs Justin Bordner November 27, 2014 at 3:54 PM A woman of your powerful sensuality knows this homeostasis of spirit, passion and consciousness Nette. I'm so honored that you are stimulated on all these levels of love which this poem illuminates. "Physical and aural energy" is the perfect feeling Nette...J.A.B.

David William Breidenthal November 25, 2014 at 7:21 PM This passion drive is incredible. The imagery is awesome and your choice of words are fanciful as always. You amaze me with words of wisdom. Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 8:56 PM Wow J.W.M., "Passion Drive " is a brilliant interchange between "sex drive"! Your expression really honors the regenerative force which upholds this poem's dedication and meaning in that the power is not one dimensional in sex, rather lust, virility is a component of a greater Awarness and love. I'm grateful for your kind reception to special poem J.W.M., thanks! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal November 25, 2014 at 5:35 PM it is without a doubt increasing enhancement, strung with harmonic chords of your deepest beliefs and desires. Holy hell, I can't get over this piece! I just love it! I can't even choose a favorite line. Your Muse is surely enlightened, as you are, with golden blooms, enlightening. Always, Laura Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 8:43 PM You are always so thorough and sensuous, your analysis so attractive and ardent, you truly seek to learn, love and feel with the pulse of poetry's passion Laura. The enlightenment intensifies, becomes more diverse by having perspectives like yours sharing in the brite wonder. Your beautiful comments are making me glow like a star lit ruby Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal November 25, 2014 at 5:33 PM Your philosophies are hot off your heart and spirit and are so real through your vivid language! There's so much going on in this piece and it is just so pleasantly surprising to read. Every piece you present is a new enlightenment and strength for me. Despite the lavishing honor of femininity sparkled and drizzled into the poem, there is clear, strong and sexy masculinity implemented that creates a magnificent balance to this intense, dreamy revelation. it's beyond balance, I'd say.. Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 8:31 PM Indeed my passionate Poetess, erupting from my heart into the landscape of love's mysterious language! Philosophy is about respect of truth which is spawned by need of love. We are always discovering that truth and love, libido and power are the quintessential forces of what makes our lives worthwhile and divine. I love exciting your mind, body and soul Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal November 25, 2014 at 5:25 PM Soothsayers, in the heat of an astronomical, physical and spiritual moment beyond all wildest dream. An immensely fiery and scintillating feat! I admire the perfect uses of astronomical terms throughout this glorious piece of genius. One of the clearest and dazzling lines of your piece: "the Universe blooms into a Multiverse as she spreads her spell of star spice scintillation onto my ripened body rendering her rites fertile in rich freight, within the brain's wildfire I feel her unction"... Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 8:19 PM Yes Laura!!! You see and feel the wider wonder in this enchantment, I knew you would do so with your heart of magnifying soul! You always find the most tender thoughts, the most sensational spirit. Being the adept of spiritual/theological nomenclature that you are I'm excited that you appreciated the unction concept. This is what makes love amazing Laura...J.A.B.

Timothy Hicks November 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM Perhaps one of your most erotic pieces to date - and yet that word doesn't seem to do it justice. You use such lusty diction to describe something spiritual and bigger than self - I'm not sure if I could ever write in the fashion that you do - the genre would turn to muck in my hands, and would (in my mind) always feel more like a porno. I commend your courage, however - it's powerful and unique. Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 8:06 PM Erotic spirituality applies well Timothy. However, the true emphasis and achievement is enlarged consciousness that our passion produces. The controversial diction that I employed herein serves the expression and meaning of my great inspiration, I believe I made virtue from what some may consider vulgar, those stimulating words have true power in our wonderful language. Thank you Timothy. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux November 25, 2014 at 8:27 AM I enjoyed the rawness of this piece. It has a primal and yet trancendent feel to it. Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 1:26 PM Raw, primal and transcendent are elements of my disposition that I never want to lose sight of, yet I must do my best to realize the higher truth and power of these things to fulfill my Destiny with honor Richard. I thank you for understanding the totality of this poem. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian November 25, 2014 at 3:53 AM Again...your love muse has inspired you to write a beauty, Justin. This has a decidedly eastern flavor to it. Your woman is powerful and strong...able to make you dream and thrive in her light. This one is very open in terms of your need and the language. It takes courage to write this way. You've always had plenty of that. I admire you for it. Justin Bordner November 25, 2014 at 1:33 PM The greatest gift of a Love Muse is to instill love courage Eileen. She is a priceless light, a divine inspiration, and a naughty Mistress. My conscious is expanded through her heavenly form which I embrace with every bit of my spirit which in turn strengthens her heart. With her I experience all the cardinal points Eileen...J.A.B.