Lady Fuchsia

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She’s dainty and pretty in pink and purple
Modeling her ruffled dress and her fuchsia hat
As her long and slender legs dance in the wind
She’s intoxicatingly beautiful and enchanting 
Wild bees seductively buzz all around her
Waiting to taste her dewy petals and nectar
A hummingbird stops and sips in her beauty
The wind picks up as her ruffles sway all around
A light rain quenches her in a cool misty dew
Her whimsy’s short lived as she soon drops off

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/31/2024 6:35:00 AM

A beautiful way to bring a Fuschia to life. Such a pretty Fuschia pic and your write shows how it inspired you. SuZ

Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/31/2024 4:06:00 PM

Suz, thank you.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2024 10:27:00 AM

really like the way you've written this clever personification

Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/13/2024 1:21:00 PM

Jack, thank you.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/28/2024 9:55:00 PM

I like the way you give this flower human attributes through resplendent lines and wordplay...nice to read you again after my long absence, Tania...blessings!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/29/2024 4:08:00 AM

Nette, thank you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/28/2024 4:43:00 AM

Dear Tania, What blooming, wonderful artistry! The imagery is so real, I could practically smell the sweet nectar and hear the bee's hum. You captured the fleeting beauty of the flower perfectly. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/28/2024 9:09:00 AM

Daniel, thank you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/28/2024 1:32:00 AM

Great personification. I love fascias though they tend to attract white flies. But there is always a remedy. A clever poem with hummingbirds included. Thanks for visiting my page. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/28/2024 3:40:00 AM

Victor, thank you. - hugs