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Lady Fuchsia

She’s dainty and pretty in pink and purple
Modeling her ruffled dress and her fuchsia hat
As her long and slender legs dance in the wind
She’s intoxicatingly beautiful and enchanting 
Wild bees seductively buzz all around her
Waiting to taste her dewy petals and nectar
A hummingbird stops and sips in her beauty
The wind picks up as her ruffles sway all around
A light rain quenches her in a cool misty dew
Her whimsy’s short lived as she soon drops off
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Delaney Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 6:35 AM
A beautiful way to bring a Fuschia to life. Such a pretty Fuschia pic and your write shows how it inspired you. SuZ
Kitchin Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 4:06 PM
Suz, thank you.
Horne Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 10:27 AM
really like the way you've written this clever personification
Kitchin Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Jack, thank you.
Onclaud Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:55 PM
I like the way you give this flower human attributes through resplendent lines and wordplay...nice to read you again after my long absence, Tania...blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:08 AM
Nette, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Dear Tania, What blooming, wonderful artistry! The imagery is so real, I could practically smell the sweet nectar and hear the bee's hum. You captured the fleeting beauty of the flower perfectly. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 9:09 AM
Daniel, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 1:32 AM
Great personification. I love fascias though they tend to attract white flies. But there is always a remedy. A clever poem with hummingbirds included. Thanks for visiting my page. Hugs.
Kitchin Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 3:40 AM
Victor, thank you. - hugs
Romios Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 2:42 PM
Awesomely, penned, Tania from first word to last! An excellent jod at this Poem type. A Fav. Pangie
Kitchin Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Pangie, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 11:55 AM
This is so pretty, Tania. Great personification. Also I love that you did a haiku contest. Those always fill up SO fast.
Kitchin Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Andrea, thank you, these flowers always remind me of ladies with fancy, frilly skirts and fuchsia hats. Hope you enter the contest.
Lane Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:14 AM
She's quite a fancy dresser. Beautiful flower and writing, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 7:29 AM
Lin, thank you. -Hugs
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