Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Lady Autumn

Near August’s end, she starts to saunter in.
The time has come when I will start to long
for June’s sweet tune I whistled on a whim,
for Autumn croons a melancholy song.

3/1/2020 
For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No26 Poetry Contest

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Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2020 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on your winning placement in Greg’s contest Andrea! xxoo

Frederic Parker April 18, 2020 at 11:43 AM congratulations Andrea, in Gregory's contest, the life of Summer's heart turns with the leaves of Autumn

John Watt April 18, 2020 at 8:46 AM "To long for June's sweet tune". I just love your poetry of seasonal change. Congrats on your win in Greg's contest - it was well-deserved. Going over to read the original now... John Watt April 18, 2020 at 8:49 AM Couldn't find "From Beautiful Sadness" in your poem list. Have you changed the title perhaps? I'd love to read it...

Gregory Richard Barden April 18, 2020 at 8:30 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved 6th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Andrea - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings, Buddy! :o) <3

James Inman April 2, 2020 at 9:47 AM Perhaps that is why Autumn is my favorite season, we have a lot in common. A lovely write Andrea.

Connie Marcum Wong March 12, 2020 at 7:13 PM The bright colors of autumn make her contradictory, yet the death of plant life makes her coming take on melancholy shades. A beautiful stanza you have chosen for this contest Andrea. Wish his list was not premier. xxoo

Joseph May March 5, 2020 at 8:24 PM Autumn always brings a somber mood, Best wishes

Irfanulla Shariff March 5, 2020 at 11:42 AM Beautifully penned, Andrea. Thanks for sharing. All the best!

Jenish Somadas March 5, 2020 at 12:52 AM Wonderful.. Your pen is so gifted.. No other words..

Maurice Yvonne March 4, 2020 at 7:19 AM Just beyond gorgeous. This one grabbed be by the throat and nearly choked the heart out of my chest. A Fav. Unbelievably beautiful. WOW!

Eric Cohen March 3, 2020 at 8:33 PM Wonderful. Your on a roll, Andrea.

Constance La France March 3, 2020 at 6:25 PM Andrea, this is lovely, it is feeling like Spring here but I know it is too early and is just a tease _Constance

CayCay Godwin March 2, 2020 at 1:58 PM Four beautiful, stand-alone lines. Personally, I'm turning giddy smelling Spring's closeness in the Virginia air. LOVE spring. I think your lines are adorable, so does June but maybe not so Autumn! Love, CayCay

Supraja Kannan March 2, 2020 at 4:19 AM A very impressive title and a lovely poetry too... Good luck in the contest, Andrea.

Rercy Zola-Zaba March 2, 2020 at 2:30 AM What better season for the world to be pretty in shades of brown!I love fall.Nice one Andrea

John Watt March 1, 2020 at 11:24 PM Andrea, I left you a little comment at your "Beautiful Sadness" poem. I think you picked a great quatrain for Greg's contest and I wish you the best ~ John

Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2020 at 7:24 PM Lovely, Andrea! I especially love the final line!

Charlie Smith March 1, 2020 at 7:21 PM Doesn't take long, best wishes Andrea...

Panagiota Romios March 1, 2020 at 6:19 PM Feally beautifully crafted, Andrea. Panagiota xx

Ilene Bauer March 1, 2020 at 5:54 PM this is beautiful, andrea!

Tom Cunningham March 1, 2020 at 5:22 PM I love summer but not a big fan of heat, so welcome autumn Good luck. Tom Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2020 at 6:59 PM I was born early september, almost autumn time. It's a beautiful time but I prefer the "fun" aspect of summer. It stays with me from when i was a kid longing for my summer vaycay!

Jan Allison March 1, 2020 at 5:02 PM a stunning stanza that stands alone as a poem in its own right:-) hugs Jan xx