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Lady Autumn

Near August’s end, she starts to saunter in. The time has come when I will start to long for June’s sweet tune I whistled on a whim, for Autumn croons a melancholy song. 3/1/2020 For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Poem No26 Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/24/2020 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement in Greg’s contest Andrea! xxoo
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Date: 4/18/2020 11:43:00 AM
congratulations Andrea, in Gregory's contest, the life of Summer's heart turns with the leaves of Autumn
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Date: 4/18/2020 8:46:00 AM
"To long for June's sweet tune". I just love your poetry of seasonal change. Congrats on your win in Greg's contest - it was well-deserved. Going over to read the original now...
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John Watt
Date: 4/18/2020 8:49:00 AM
Couldn't find "From Beautiful Sadness" in your poem list. Have you changed the title perhaps? I'd love to read it...
Date: 4/18/2020 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 6th place in the Rithimus Divisa Poetry Contest, Andrea - this was a VERY close contest, with so many wonderful writes - blessings, Buddy! :o) <3
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Date: 4/2/2020 9:47:00 AM
Perhaps that is why Autumn is my favorite season, we have a lot in common. A lovely write Andrea.
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Date: 3/12/2020 7:13:00 PM
The bright colors of autumn make her contradictory, yet the death of plant life makes her coming take on melancholy shades. A beautiful stanza you have chosen for this contest Andrea. Wish his list was not premier. xxoo
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Date: 3/5/2020 8:24:00 PM
Autumn always brings a somber mood, Best wishes
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Date: 3/5/2020 11:42:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Andrea. Thanks for sharing. All the best!
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Date: 3/5/2020 12:52:00 AM
Wonderful.. Your pen is so gifted.. No other words..
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Date: 3/4/2020 7:19:00 AM
Just beyond gorgeous. This one grabbed be by the throat and nearly choked the heart out of my chest. A Fav. Unbelievably beautiful. WOW!
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Date: 3/3/2020 8:33:00 PM
Wonderful. Your on a roll, Andrea.
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Date: 3/3/2020 6:25:00 PM
Andrea, this is lovely, it is feeling like Spring here but I know it is too early and is just a tease _Constance
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Date: 3/2/2020 1:58:00 PM
Four beautiful, stand-alone lines. Personally, I'm turning giddy smelling Spring's closeness in the Virginia air. LOVE spring. I think your lines are adorable, so does June but maybe not so Autumn! Love, CayCay
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Date: 3/2/2020 4:19:00 AM
A very impressive title and a lovely poetry too... Good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 3/2/2020 2:30:00 AM
What better season for the world to be pretty in shades of brown!I love fall.Nice one Andrea
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Date: 3/1/2020 11:24:00 PM
Andrea, I left you a little comment at your "Beautiful Sadness" poem. I think you picked a great quatrain for Greg's contest and I wish you the best ~ John
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Date: 3/1/2020 7:24:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea! I especially love the final line!
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Date: 3/1/2020 7:21:00 PM
Doesn't take long, best wishes Andrea...
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Date: 3/1/2020 6:19:00 PM
Feally beautifully crafted, Andrea. Panagiota xx
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Date: 3/1/2020 5:54:00 PM
this is beautiful, andrea!
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Date: 3/1/2020 5:22:00 PM
I love summer but not a big fan of heat, so welcome autumn Good luck. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/1/2020 6:59:00 PM
I was born early september, almost autumn time. It's a beautiful time but I prefer the "fun" aspect of summer. It stays with me from when i was a kid longing for my summer vaycay!
Date: 3/1/2020 5:02:00 PM
a stunning stanza that stands alone as a poem in its own right:-) hugs Jan xx
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