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Blue tunnel glimmers where dome meets the ray in cadence of lulled sleep, its final veil... the flight grows misty in a blooming sway as my soul climbs the ladder of bright trail; where heaven’s portal dips in moonlit spray... Awed by Mother Mary’s grace, I exhale whispered prayers and sighs, for all deeds wrong, then twice, thrice, harps release a lilting song. First touch of kisses glints like winding sparks I reach for Mom and Dad’s arms, gently mauve, beside them, my brothers crowned by night larks while we stride on a rainbow high above... Then comes my school mate, queen of loud remarks, embracing peace to thank our Enlightened Dove. O timeless realm where sweet harmony dwells, breaths of oneness chime for God’s final spells. Dated 11/27/2015 Contest by Laura Urbanaik I Went To Heaven~ 10 syl count per line By nette onclaud

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Date: 12/4/2015 2:27:00 PM
Such a spiritual and peaceful feeling I get from your words. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:49:00 AM
Your muse is working very well for you, Nette. I love where your imagination went on this one and was delighted I got to follow you there. Very creative and such a rewarding read ... CayCay
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:56:00 PM
Absolutely lovely! I had to look up Ottava Rima and can't wait to try it. Congrats!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:50:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:13:00 PM
Lovely, ethereal write, nette, well done! Viv x
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:30:00 PM
Wonderful write nette! Congrats on top podium!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 1:27:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Nette.
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:12:00 AM
Congrats Nette! The joy of meeting parents in after life is compellingl
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:45:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your win in my contest :)You always carry a wonderful flow when you write, thank you for being a part of my contest@:)-lu *smiles*
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Date: 11/27/2015 8:58:00 PM
FANTASTIC ENTRY IN THAT CONTEST MY FRIEND!! Ending couplet , tis' divine methinks. A7
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Date: 11/27/2015 4:40:00 PM
The human mind has such tenderness to create this vision within that you have shared.
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Date: 11/27/2015 1:57:00 PM
Heaven to me is anywhere, but with your ethereal poem, I really want to experience this timeless space! Bookmarked for inspiration!
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Date: 11/27/2015 12:56:00 PM
- 1. Vie Rose: She does not knit the words - // - 2. It is beautiful embroidery with silk threads - A pleasure to climb up to heaven with you - Luck in contest, Nette - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2015 12:29:00 PM
A blissful state to be! Your deep perspective of an eternal Eden is truly enhanced with divine lines coming from an enlightened soul!
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:09:00 AM
Enchanting poem, Nette! jimbo
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