Faye Gibson Poet Alliteration

Lacquered Lace

Softly silver snow sifts, soundless,
lattice-like, a lacquered lace of layering light,
startling sparrows, shyly shivering for shelter,
on leafless, lustered limbs - lancets, londonite.

November 28, 2017
For Alliteration Contest

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Sandra Haight December 9, 2017 at 3:38 PM Nicely done, Faye! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper December 8, 2017 at 7:29 PM Well done Faye, congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison December 8, 2017 at 4:47 PM Many congrats on your win Faye:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings December 8, 2017 at 2:18 PM Congratulations on your win, Faye, with this charming piece. // Barry.

David Mohn November 28, 2017 at 10:42 PM tremendous Faye

Susan Ashley November 28, 2017 at 7:11 PM Faye, a lush and lustrous scene depicted in beautiful layers of alliteration. I love all the soft sounds associated with your snowy and wintry imagery. Beautiful and good luck in the contest.. Warmest wishes.

Jan Allison November 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM absolutely beautiful alliteration and imagery Faye:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong November 28, 2017 at 3:50 PM Wow, wow, wow Faye! Excellent! : )