Laura Leiser Poet Pleiades

Lackadaisical

Listless as a slug, he
  lowered his standards, as
    lazy habits lingered.
      Leaving a good job, his
    life languished. With such a
  lax demeanor, a whole
lot of time was wasted.

 


Written on 4/16/2017

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Emile Pinet May 4, 2017 at 2:30 PM Your talent and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left stunned at how easy you make it look. Emile. Laura Leiser May 4, 2017 at 3:22 PM Thank you, Emile! I am quite astounded by your poetic gifts...so much better thine mine, I think!

Mark Martin April 27, 2017 at 12:44 PM Shame how some people allow their lives to descend to this. Congratulations on your win Laura! :-) Laura Leiser April 27, 2017 at 2:19 PM I know, right? Thanks for your comments, Mark. :)

Kim Merryman April 19, 2017 at 9:56 PM Great descriptive work and smooth flow, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim Laura Leiser April 27, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues April 18, 2017 at 3:59 PM Lazy slug...lol! Nice one. Congrats, Laura! Laura Leiser April 27, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Kim. :)

Paul Callus April 18, 2017 at 5:42 AM Congratulations, Laura!! Pleased to have you sharing this podium finish with me, especially since we both tackled the same theme:) Funny, you went for a slug, while I went for a lizard! Regards // paul Laura Leiser April 27, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Paul. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 18, 2017 at 1:31 AM - Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser April 27, 2017 at 2:18 PM Thanks, Anne Lise. :)

Doug Vinson April 17, 2017 at 12:13 PM Bad slug-man! : ) Laura Leiser April 17, 2017 at 10:24 PM I know, huh?!

Sara Chansarkar April 17, 2017 at 10:49 AM Its an excellent topic and description Laura! Laura Leiser April 17, 2017 at 10:23 PM Thanks, Sara. :)

Eileen Manassian April 17, 2017 at 1:01 AM Yes...how sad. So many waste their lives this way. I like how you write this, dear...Good luck in the contest. Laura Leiser April 17, 2017 at 10:23 PM Thanks, Eileen. :)