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Lackadaisical

Listless as a slug, he lowered his standards, as lazy habits lingered. Leaving a good job, his life languished. With such a lax demeanor, a whole lot of time was wasted. Written on 4/16/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/4/2017 2:30:00 PM
Your talent and wit wrap themselves around your words and we are left stunned at how easy you make it look. Emile.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/4/2017 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Emile! I am quite astounded by your poetic gifts...so much better thine mine, I think!
Date: 4/27/2017 12:44:00 PM
Shame how some people allow their lives to descend to this. Congratulations on your win Laura! :-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:19:00 PM
I know, right? Thanks for your comments, Mark. :)
Date: 4/19/2017 9:56:00 PM
Great descriptive work and smooth flow, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. :)
Date: 4/18/2017 3:59:00 PM
Lazy slug...lol! Nice one. Congrats, Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. :)
Date: 4/18/2017 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura!! Pleased to have you sharing this podium finish with me, especially since we both tackled the same theme:) Funny, you went for a slug, while I went for a lizard! Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. :)
Date: 4/18/2017 1:31:00 AM
- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/27/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise. :)
Date: 4/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Bad slug-man! : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/17/2017 10:24:00 PM
I know, huh?!
Date: 4/17/2017 10:49:00 AM
Its an excellent topic and description Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/17/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. :)
Date: 4/17/2017 1:01:00 AM
Yes...how sad. So many waste their lives this way. I like how you write this, dear...Good luck in the contest.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/17/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, Eileen. :)

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