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Laceration

Shredding layer after layer Until laid threadbare, You keep up your game Until the wild turns tame. Unraveling piece after piece Until utter unease, You flaunt your art Until the knots fall apart. In a lapse of eons… Until the wit dims For spirit to kindle. Pray build me in your mint And lend me strength For blows And aches. Rips and Jabs. Drained of will, This Being's now an empty vessel; Shape, Carve, Fill. Here and now… I bow. I surrender, I implore. Ferry me across, carry ashore To Quiescence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/28/2020 4:29:00 AM
I can feel the anguish and i can feel the pain in your words Harpreet.. Deeply emotive poem..
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Harpreet Kaur
Date: 11/28/2020 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for the empathic feedback! Every comment brings more encouragement to write, contemplate and write. I appreciate your time and response. I hope my readers can discern the theme of anguish and setbacks as a gift to human soul.

Book: Shattered Sighs