Laced Romance

Shadows romance

Through fine-laced mantle

Of whirlpool’s river dance,

And a kiss gushes high

Beneath froth of clouds

Where stars advance



Franco Gonza 9/22/2013
Compression Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Great job, congratulations.
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October 10, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Hi Franco... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA
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October 9, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Franco, congrats on your win with this lovely poem! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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October 8, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Franco.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Passionate winning work..Congrats..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 1:30 AM
fantastic imagery. Congrats on your win!
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 5:50 PM
great writing. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 9:30 AM
Beautiful write.Congrats on your win.
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September 23, 2013 at 6:50 AM
- A lovely poem for contest.... good luck Franco! - oxox //Anne-Lise :)
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