LABYRINTHINE PATHS

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LABYRINTHINE PATHS
“You have no need to travel anywhere—journey within yourself. Enter a mine of rubies and bathe in the splendor of your own light.” Rumi
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I walk softly into the labyrinth,
knowing not what I will find.
Cautiously, I journey within. 

Through labyrinthine paths I meander
seeking answers.
Expectantly, I journey within.

Time unfolds like an origami crane,
‘art of being’ stitched to its wings.
Silently I journey within. 

I take apart this paper sculpture
each fold a lesson in being. 
Optimistically, I journey within. 

I look for truth on the crumpled paper,
the complex duality of my existence.
Scrupulously, I journey within. 

My heart is a labyrinth,
its chambers filled with longing.
Joyfully, I journey within. 

I emerge, transformed, quietly reassured.
The journey within is the journey home.

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Joe Dimino

Date: 8/16/2025 3:58:00 AM

Ah Yes, the journey within is to unite with all the without, in a far greater, more knowing loving relationship. With God, there is no out, no in, no up-down~ only presence. We are all His constant Favorite. Beautiful, inspirational writing.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/16/2025 6:23:00 PM

I like your comments, Joe. They linger on my mind, especially 'only presence' so true, blessings Sara

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/15/2025 8:42:00 PM

With caution, you journey within, yet, as you find your way through, you're optimistic. And joyful. :) Your thoughts hold meaning, depth and inspiration. My best to you, Sara. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/16/2025 6:22:00 PM

thank you, Brandy! Your comments were meaningful and encouraging. Wishing you a delightful evening, hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/15/2025 6:09:00 PM

Such lovely descriptions of the labyrinthine . I was there today at the Jesuit Retreat Center they have a lovely big one, and I walk it while I'm there, next time I go I'll take a photo . :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/16/2025 6:21:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Rose...and I look forward to seeing that photo...sounds awesome, blessings and hugs, Sara