Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 3rd November 2023

Labyrinthine, Languish, Letter - words Poetry Contest

 Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Labyrinthine

There’s no hiding place beneath moon or sun
Christ see's it all as the planet is spun.
Quote - Poet’s own
Life’s a labyrinthine of twisting roads
Roads that direct us to our final home
At times we find ourselves stuck at crossroads 
Despair not for there’s many roads to roam.

One day we’ll arrive where we aim to be
Could be paradise or a cell in hell
Eternal happiness or misery
How well one has travelled life, who can tell.

The roads not taken could be for the best
It's the narrow roads that lead one to grace
Pick wrong labyrinthine and fail God's test
And not meet the King of Kings face to face.

To the left or to the right it’s your choice
Have faith in your heart and follow the light
In the distance sweet angels will rejoice
And a room’s prepared with heaven’s foresight.

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Bill Baker November 11, 2023 at 8:31 PM I see below that congratulations are in order for your contest win, my friend! Yeah! A lot of wisdom in this poem, Belle. I hope people see the message you are sharing. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Beryl Edmonds November 14, 2023 at 1:42 AM Thank you Bill very much, poet pal Belle

Paula Goldsmith November 10, 2023 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write/picture/great quote. Have a great day............ Beryl Edmonds November 10, 2023 at 4:40 PM Thank you Paula, pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a lovely day too… Belle

Terry Miller November 10, 2023 at 8:18 AM Congratulations, Belle, a very fine poem. Beryl Edmonds November 10, 2023 at 4:39 PM Thank yiu Terry, appreciated very much… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2023 at 8:39 AM - Congratulations on your top win, Belle :) - hugs Beryl Edmonds November 9, 2023 at 12:18 PM Thank you very much Anne-Lise, appreciated… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose November 5, 2023 at 6:00 PM your poem promises great things done in powerful ways, I really enjoyed reading this dear poet Beryl Edmonds November 5, 2023 at 6:20 PM I’m pleased you enjoyed the read, thank you Rose… Belle

Sotto Poet November 4, 2023 at 7:40 AM What a beautiful philosophical discussion, Belle. There's a lot to learn from your poem: It's your call, go left or right. Excellent advice to trust oneself and go in the direction of the light. Beryl Edmonds November 4, 2023 at 10:45 AM Thank you Sotto, appreciated very much… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2023 at 6:13 AM - Our choices ... all depending on our choices ... a lovely poem, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Beryl Edmonds November 4, 2023 at 10:44 AM Thank you Anne-Lise :) enjoy the weekend too… Belle

Victor Buhagiar November 4, 2023 at 1:54 AM Yes, we do have a choice. But in reality, we don't. Our only choice leads to heavenly bliss. Blessings. Beryl Edmonds November 4, 2023 at 2:09 AM Hopefully our choices lead us to heavens door. Thank you Victor… Belle

Vijay Pandit November 3, 2023 at 4:34 PM A splendid dialogue on life, Belle. Much to gleam from your poem: To the left or to the right it’s your choice Have faith in your heart and follow the light--well said! Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2023 at 5:07 PM Thank you very much Vijay, I truly appreciate that… Belle

I Am Anaya November 3, 2023 at 4:03 PM First of all a quote of perfection, to me. Oh yes Belle, they say a maze we get lost in, a labyrinth we find ourselves! Smashing work! ...like you Brits say :D Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2023 at 5:06 PM Thank you Anaya, pleased you like the poem and quote. Good work or smashing work is what the Brits usual say :D ~ Belle