Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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La Seduction

I watched it all
from my backseat
rolling out
like a red carpet
the charm
the lies
the deceit
and she took it all in
every last drop of it
it was much
like watching
a trainwreck
in slow motion



AP:  3rd place 2020

Submitted on April 24, 2019 for APRIL 2019 PREMIER 9 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Derani Blackburn April 29, 2019 at 8:24 PM I love your poem. Can picture everything you say and great title. Congrats on your win xx Line Gauthier April 29, 2019 at 8:41 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Derani.

Beata Agustin April 27, 2019 at 9:13 AM Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing your talent. (I'm warned by your poem... as I remember the subtle seduction of a craving...) God bless you. Line Gauthier April 27, 2019 at 10:25 AM Thanks for your lovely much appreciated visit and comment, Beata.

Mystic Rose Rose April 27, 2019 at 5:08 AM Ah, your poem was short but full of innuendos. Making it an excellent choice for 1st place, I loved it Line, Congratulations . xo Line Gauthier April 27, 2019 at 7:06 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Pixie.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2019 at 6:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. I am picturing this a child in back of a car seeing her mom being taken for another "ride" Did I come close? Line Gauthier April 26, 2019 at 6:41 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. It's always good when poems can be interpreted in several ways.

Susan Ashley April 26, 2019 at 5:35 PM Wonderfully expressive, Line. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Line Gauthier April 26, 2019 at 6:05 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

P.S. Awtry April 26, 2019 at 1:55 PM Congratulations on this excellent poem’s well deserved trophy win :) Line Gauthier April 26, 2019 at 1:56 PM Thank you so much, PS.

Rhona Mcferran March 14, 2019 at 10:13 PM It's awful when you can see it happening, but are powerless to stop it... well penned! Line Gauthier March 14, 2019 at 10:35 PM Indeed. Thanks for your visit and comment, Rhona.