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I watched it all from my backseat rolling out like a red carpet the charm the lies the deceit and she took it all in every last drop of it it was much like watching a trainwreck in slow motion AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on April 24, 2019 for APRIL 2019 PREMIER 9 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on March 14, 2019

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Date: 4/29/2019 8:24:00 PM
I love your poem. Can picture everything you say and great title. Congrats on your win xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Derani.
Date: 4/27/2019 9:13:00 AM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing your talent. (I'm warned by your poem... as I remember the subtle seduction of a craving...) God bless you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2019 10:25:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely much appreciated visit and comment, Beata.
Date: 4/27/2019 5:08:00 AM
Ah, your poem was short but full of innuendos. Making it an excellent choice for 1st place, I loved it Line, Congratulations . xo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/27/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Pixie.
Date: 4/26/2019 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line. I am picturing this a child in back of a car seeing her mom being taken for another "ride" Did I come close?
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. It's always good when poems can be interpreted in several ways.
Date: 4/26/2019 5:35:00 PM
Wonderfully expressive, Line. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/26/2019 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations Line on your 1st place win with this well written verse.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2019 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/26/2019 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this excellent poem’s well deserved trophy win :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2019 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, PS.
Date: 3/14/2019 10:13:00 PM
It's awful when you can see it happening, but are powerless to stop it... well penned!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2019 10:35:00 PM
Indeed. Thanks for your visit and comment, Rhona.

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