La Noel Sucree

Using the snow to make white chocolate,
And we cheerfully waltz down a sponge street. 
As we melt away in the sweet, sugary clouds, 
I can't wait for our hands to meet! 

Because you're so sweet, I'll make it bitter,
And I use more meringue that usual. 
A kersch-flavored cherry carriage rolls in, 
And to the next station, being careful. 

Wearing the scent of lovely vanilla and with an Xmas ticket, 
I buy your favorite tart at the Chiffon Cake Street shop. 
I walk delicately to your home so I don't drop the cake, 
So please wait for me as I skip on a gumdrop. 

I stop at the candle fields, 
Enjoying the bright colors, red, blue, and yellow. 
I drink a glass of red juice, 
Tonight is a special night where our love will grow~! 

I won't take much more time to get to you, 
I wonder if my cake is okay? 
Wait, my reindeer is running away! 
Flying with a red-nose express through the grey. 

When the snow falls, it's a light acrylic pink, 
My fingers are colored purple when I touch it. 
I can't take your call right now, I promise though, 
When I come, you'll get a big Christmas star tonight! 

With a sugary frosting, I paint a heart on the tree, 
Love will be in the air tonight. 
So wait for me, I have to walk delicately, 
I won't drop the cake, alright? 

For the Children's Christmas or Holiday Tale competition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautifully imaginative poem.
Carris Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Thank you :)
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations, La Noel, enjoyed the story. Blessings eve
Carris Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Thank you so much :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
Carris Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Thank you
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 8:41 AM
nicely done poem, congrats on the win
Carris Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Thank you
Johnson Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:27 PM
A sugary delight. c\Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Carris Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 10:43 PM
Thank you
Allison Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 3:59 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xxx
Carris Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Allison Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 1:21 PM
oh this poem is so filled of amazing imagery i could dive in and eat right now - good luck in the contests this is charming:-) hugs jan xx
Carris Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Thank you :) Hugs
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