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Monoku Marc Chagall Poetry Contest

La Mariee

la mariée

satan plays upon a bull fiddle ~ stringed music or wooing riddle

as virgin bride inveigles middle ~ seducing all midst the twiddle

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 28, 2024 at 5:24 PM

A beautiful interpretation of the great painting, David! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings.

David Kavanagh

August 29, 2024 at 2:30 AM

Thank you so much Evelyn, the interpretation was totally spontaneous, putting it into Monoku form took a little bit longer, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

August 28, 2024 at 2:11 PM

Congratulations on your winning work that is in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

David Kavanagh

August 28, 2024 at 3:04 PM

Thank you Sara, it certainly is the way to go, I’m delighted to make the grade, cheers David

thriveni c mysore

August 27, 2024 at 9:40 PM

'wooing riddle' amazing write, congratulations dear poet. cheers.

David Kavanagh

August 28, 2024 at 2:44 AM

Thanks so much for dropping back with congrats Thriveni, I am delighted with the win and your kind comments, cheers David

Jan Allison

August 27, 2024 at 4:28 PM

Many congrats on your win, I love your interpretation of the image David and your use of internal rhyme too, ive never seen Chagall's artwork until i was trying to write for the contest! hugs Jan x

David Kavanagh

August 28, 2024 at 2:41 AM

Thanks so much Jan, a very enjoyable experience figuring this one out, Chagall certainly has some mind boggling pieces, I was delighted with the win in Dilly’s contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

August 27, 2024 at 9:59 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "La Mariée" write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........

David Kavanagh

August 27, 2024 at 11:53 AM

Heya Paula, I am thrilled with the win, hope you got those photo issues sorted out, thanks so much cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2024 at 5:34 AM

Interesting interpretation! Congrats on top win, David!

David Kavanagh

August 27, 2024 at 5:56 AM

Heya Kim, I am delighted with the win, even more so because it’s my favourite monoku form, cheers David

Karen Jones

August 27, 2024 at 4:38 AM

Congratulations on your brilliant win!

David Kavanagh

August 27, 2024 at 5:54 AM

Thanks so much Karen, was a great contest to be involved in, cheers David

Arlo Parker

August 26, 2024 at 8:26 AM

Chagall is tough to interpret and your piece gives it depth defined. Braver man than me! Good luck in the contest. :o))

David Kavanagh

August 26, 2024 at 8:42 AM

Thanks Arlo, I usually just go with my gut on these interpretational pieces, probably best not to overthink the consequences! Cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

August 24, 2024 at 1:22 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative "La Mariée" write. "Good Luck" I did not see this one when I picked mine. Wish I could get the picture to load in. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

David Kavanagh

August 24, 2024 at 2:14 PM

Heya Paula, I had the very same problem trying to load this one last night, I emailed PS and told them, (no reply) but it loaded ok this morning, thanks so much for stopping by, hope you get sorted soon, cheers David

Lin Lane

August 24, 2024 at 5:47 AM

Chagall likes floaters in his paintings. It’s as if they swim on his canvas. You did a twofer. I didn’t know we could write more than one. Yours are both outstanding, and of course, rhyming.

David Kavanagh

August 24, 2024 at 6:08 AM

Heya Lin, I didn’t actually see anything in the rules saying limited to one monoku, I just went with my own immediate interpretation, A twofer seemed to be screaming at me! Lol, high praise, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

August 24, 2024 at 4:24 AM

You interpreted the painting well David, you have a keen eye. Good luck in the contest and have a great weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh

August 24, 2024 at 5:35 AM

I was looking through quite a few Chagall’s Tom, this one seemed to jump out at me, and literally wrote itself, thanks so much, have a great weekend too, cheers David