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Monoku Marc Chagall Poetry Contest

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/28/2024 5:24:00 PM

A beautiful interpretation of the great painting, David! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessings.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/29/2024 2:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Evelyn, the interpretation was totally spontaneous, putting it into Monoku form took a little bit longer, cheers David

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/28/2024 2:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work that is in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2024 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Sara, it certainly is the way to go, I’m delighted to make the grade, cheers David

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/27/2024 9:40:00 PM

'wooing riddle' amazing write, congratulations dear poet. cheers.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2024 2:44:00 AM

Thanks so much for dropping back with congrats Thriveni, I am delighted with the win and your kind comments, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2024 4:28:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, I love your interpretation of the image David and your use of internal rhyme too, ive never seen Chagall's artwork until i was trying to write for the contest! hugs Jan x

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/28/2024 2:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Jan, a very enjoyable experience figuring this one out, Chagall certainly has some mind boggling pieces, I was delighted with the win in Dilly’s contest, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2024 9:59:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "La Mariée" write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2024 11:53:00 AM

Heya Paula, I am thrilled with the win, hope you got those photo issues sorted out, thanks so much cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2024 5:34:00 AM

Interesting interpretation! Congrats on top win, David!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2024 5:56:00 AM

Heya Kim, I am delighted with the win, even more so because it’s my favourite monoku form, cheers David

Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your brilliant win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2024 5:54:00 AM

Thanks so much Karen, was a great contest to be involved in, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 8/27/2024 3:40:00 AM

You eloquently captured the movement and mystery within the painting David whilst ensuring there was an element of edginess. Encapsulating what it is to be intriguing and insightful with a little bit of unknown danger - excellent :) thank you for taking the time to write for my contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/27/2024 4:24:00 AM

Woohoo! Thanks so much Dilly it’s definitely one of my better monokus for direct line of sight into the abstract world rather than the other way round, was a great feeling when this one spontaneously fell into place, after searching through Chagall’s back catalogue, edginess comes quite naturally to me for better or worse, cheers David

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/26/2024 8:26:00 AM

Chagall is tough to interpret and your piece gives it depth defined. Braver man than me! Good luck in the contest. :o))

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/26/2024 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Arlo, I usually just go with my gut on these interpretational pieces, probably best not to overthink the consequences! Cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2024 1:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your creative "La Mariée" write. "Good Luck" I did not see this one when I picked mine. Wish I could get the picture to load in. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2024 2:14:00 PM

Heya Paula, I had the very same problem trying to load this one last night, I emailed PS and told them, (no reply) but it loaded ok this morning, thanks so much for stopping by, hope you get sorted soon, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 8/24/2024 5:47:00 AM

Chagall likes floaters in his paintings. It’s as if they swim on his canvas. You did a twofer. I didn’t know we could write more than one. Yours are both outstanding, and of course, rhyming.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2024 6:08:00 AM

Heya Lin, I didn’t actually see anything in the rules saying limited to one monoku, I just went with my own immediate interpretation, A twofer seemed to be screaming at me! Lol, high praise, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/24/2024 4:24:00 AM

You interpreted the painting well David, you have a keen eye. Good luck in the contest and have a great weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2024 5:35:00 AM

I was looking through quite a few Chagall’s Tom, this one seemed to jump out at me, and literally wrote itself, thanks so much, have a great weekend too, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/24/2024 3:13:00 AM

Our Lady is the greatest of us all.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2024 5:32:00 AM

La Mariée is just French for (the bride) you perhaps see a little deeper into this one, which is great! Cheers David

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/24/2024 1:24:00 AM

beautiful dear poet. so very beautiful.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/24/2024 5:29:00 AM

Heya Thriveni, I’m so delighted you you found some beauty in this one, I did too, was an enjoyable one to write, cheers David