La Belle Et La Bête (Beauty and the Beast)

The sweet neck of her life came adorned with dazzling jewels of the ages;
jewels imbued with holy virtues, long before she was born.
She rose, alone, Venus veiled above a sparkling sea,
her love light flashing wherever she gazed.

As she spun her cosmic spiral, a tiger, hungry with anger and bitterness,
tore at the veil, hoping to claim victory—fire and passion.
Each time she dipped her head, trying to free herself from the ships of ancient
torments that lay anchored at her throat, the tiger roared for more,
devouring jewel upon jewel—fire upon fire, passion upon passion.

She lay, alone, her carotid adornment shortened by the tiger’s every move,
her virtues struck down until she was left grasping at a choker
‘round her throat, her life soon to end.

Then, in the billowing clouds of her torment, she saw Diana rising from the sea.
She stood on an iridescent ivory shell, her arrow poised to strike.
The tiger raged, but could not pierce the clouds.
A red fury filled with fire and passion shot from its hell-born eyes;
its massive jaws spewed hot saliva that set the sea on fire.

The sea itself cried out, “Golden Diana, make your arrow swift and sure;
the world in Venus is quickly fading.
Strike now, the tiger, and restore all aright!”

Even while the prayer was being uttered,
Diana’s aim proved its power as the arrow found the tiger’s heart.

In a flash, Venus was restored,
her long strand of jewels aglow,
the tiger at her side.
Together they stood in a deep, iridescent ivory shell
and made their way out to sea
with a wind that was sure and true.

All was set aright.  All was free
as they sailed into the rising moon,
her Venus jewels lighting the way.



Written in contemplation of Dream Caused by the Flight of a Bee around a
Pomegranate, One Second before Awakening, by Salvador Dali. (1944)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 3:44 PM
You should be very proud of this. It reads like something from an old master. I have always admired Dali, whom I consider a man of real genius, as opposed to Picaso and Pollack, who are specious fads and personal frauds. Well done. Thank you for your kind remarks on my contest entry. I appreciate it, especially given your level of talent. Regards, Gk
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June 6, 2009 at 1:08 PM
Orma,..ty for bringing excitement to my day with this for true,..poetry ! Congratulations on making the winners list with this,..many more to ya ! james
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June 6, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations Orma on your win.Best wishes,Fide
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June 2, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Congratulations Orma on your narrative making the winnersa list. Vince
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June 1, 2009 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your win Orma. Love, Carol
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June 1, 2009 at 4:05 AM
YAY Orma! Warmest congrats on your extremely excellent win and well deserved win! Love, Shar
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June 1, 2009 at 12:45 AM
C ongratulations on this featured poem and more power. God bless. Ernlando
Mason Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 10:32 PM
Great story here, Orma ... just brillant and a well-deserved selection to be a winner in the latest Soup contest. Congratulations !!
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May 31, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 31, 2009 at 9:34 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
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May 31, 2009 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
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May 31, 2009 at 5:38 AM
Congratulations on your win Orma!
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May 31, 2009 at 1:17 AM
Orma, my congratulations to you on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto
Jordan Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Orma - congratulations on placing in the soup's contest- - God Bless, MJ
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May 12, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Orma. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 3, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Orma, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Winter Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 5:48 PM
Hi Orma! Thanks for the congrats and right back at ya! This my dear, is a masterpiece in every way! So great to read it again. Good luck - and so great hearing from you! Hugs, Shar xoxo
Mason Avatar
February 20, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Beautiful and brillant write here, Orma and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature here at the Soup this week! Congratulations!
Winter Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 5:23 AM
Congrats dear Orma on your beautiful featured write. Off the site for a while due to personal reasons but had to stop by to congratulate you. Hope all is well. Love, Shar
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February 17, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Congratulations Orma on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. You've put the picture into words. God Bless. Vince
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February 16, 2009 at 4:35 PM
Interesting story in poetry form. I like the happy ending. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen
Jordan Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Orma I think my dear friend Sharon took the words up out of my mouth - Outstanding - congrats on being featured - God bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
December 30, 2008 at 4:55 PM
Wow Orma. Had to look up the painting first! What an imagination you have and what a magnificent write! You would make Dali very proud, as his imagination and talent was unsurpassed! It gives me the Greek Mythology feel. Outstanding!!! Love, Shar
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