L Saw

Ilene went for her morning walk She saw some friends and stopped to talk The rain fell down And soaked her gown And everyone else stopped to gawk

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 7/9/2021 5:55:00 PM

LOL, good one.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/9/2021 1:35:00 PM

At least she was worth gawking at hopefully. funny one..

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/9/2021 11:54:00 AM

Nice shout-out to one of our best poets! Enjoyed it, Rico.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/9/2021 11:50:00 AM

She might have made it back but for her friends, next time she should cross the road and keep her head down lol. Tom

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/9/2021 11:42:00 AM

Hey Rico! Thank you for the funny shout-out, but I waited for the rain to stop before taking my daily walk (which does rhyme with gawk, as does New Yawk!) so no one got the chance to gawk (not that I have that much to see!) Hope you’re having your usual sunshine in Hawaii…

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/9/2021 11:46:00 AM

So the FOX News report that you won the Wet T-Shirt contest was in error? That Elsa did not have a wild time but left New York more like a kitten than a lioness? For Heaven's sake; what next?

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/9/2021 11:22:00 AM

Lol! Rico, This is hilarious; I hope she likes it. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 7/9/2021 11:18:00 AM

lol but it actually rhymes to me Rico! i bet Ilene would wow them all rain soaked gown or not, she is one amazing poet:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/9/2021 11:09:00 AM

It does not take Peter Balk to deduce that "gawk" does not rhyme with "walk" nor "talk" but, what the L, it is only an imerick, right?

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/10/2021 11:13:00 AM

Naught to worry as they are just upset by the fact that your poems get more reads than their poems!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2021 11:20:00 AM

I just write limericks even if they are deemed as porn and filth by the pc brigade lol and will never stop Rico!:-) hugs jan xx