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Kyrielle Two

Kyrielle Two Dry caverns yearn for fountainheads Splashing whirlpools filling streambeds Dusty grottos of emptiness Laugh with wellspring’s joyful excess. Parched hollows in transformation, In arid anticipation, Longing aqua waves sweet press Laugh with wellspring’s joyful excess. Deep reservoir of creation Hears the flowing invitation Swirling clear tides swell in access Laugh with wellspring’s joyful excess. Dulcet fountains gush in rebirth Sweet waters burst out from dry earth Living waters with grace to bless Laugh with wellspring’s joyful excess 8-10-22 Contest: Kyrielle with a Water Theme Sponsor: Kim Rodriques Syllables Checked with www.howmanysyllables

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/25/2022 10:06:00 PM

"Dusty grottos of emptiness Laugh with wellspring’s joyful excess" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2022 9:38:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris. Truly water is life and life giving. Sending you blessings of refreshment and renewal!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2022 9:21:00 AM

Sam my friend, congratulations on your wonderful win, you deserve all the praise and honor. I have been in and out of hospital and lucky to be alive - God bless - hugs, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/6/2022 9:49:00 AM

Just thinking about and hope you are continuing to heal. Prayers, blessings and a hug!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2022 9:35:00 AM

Dearest Jennifer, I am so sorry to hear you have been so sick but I am glad to hear that you are healing and out of the hospital. What an ordeal you have been through dear friend. Thank you for your congratulations and your lovely note. This poem on water was not only fun to write but took me into a place of refreshment and renewal. Know you are in my thoughts and prayers as you continue on your journey of healing. Blessings and a BIG hug. Please keep me up to date on your progress.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/24/2022 7:42:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Sam. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2022 9:25:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your congratulations. So glad you enjoyed this poem. I love to write about the renewing elements of water. Blessings to you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/24/2022 7:10:00 AM

Sam, a wellspring of imagery and joy! Congratulations on 3rd place!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/27/2022 9:23:00 AM

Hi Kim! Thank you for the opportunity to write in this delightful, lyrical form - a poetry song! So grateful for your placement. This poem was fun to write. Water is always such an amazing topic. Sending you fountains of blessings.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/8/2022 10:45:00 PM

This holds the pure hope of water, so gracefully drawn, your last stanza so jubilant like waterfalls :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 9/9/2022 10:38:00 AM

Hi Michelle! I love your description of "jubilant waterfalls!" That perfectly describes the joy of a splashing fountain! Thank you so much for your thoughtful reply! You really got to the heart of this poem - joyful renewal and refreshment! Take care dear friend! Blessings.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/12/2022 8:45:00 PM

This is very fine writing, Sam. I enjoyed your Kyrielle a lot, and I wish you the best in Kim's contest.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/15/2022 10:02:00 AM

Hi Milt! I must be losing it! I was so sure I had responded to your lovely message! Thank you so much. Your note gave my day a little lift. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I am so appreciative of your best wishes. I really enjoyed writing this "water" dance! All the best. Thank you again!

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/12/2022 9:56:00 AM

Water is such a priceless treasure. Thirst quenched in the purest sense... only by water. Great Kyrielle, Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/12/2022 10:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenna! Truly water is a priceless treasure that we, often, take for granted! And you are so right in saying that living water will quench our thirst! Learning to write a kyrielle was like writing a song to the sound of water dancing in a fountain. I am so glad you liked this one. Blessings!