Notes About The Poem

“Long falls the rain yet nothing is wet
long waits the heart yet nothing rests.”

- Poet

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Kunlun’s Thirty-Year Rain

the orchid lamp burns low against the screen of jade  
a silver hairpin pierces the frozen musk  
kingfisher quilt lies undone  
eaglewood breathes unrisen dusk  

dripping copper drains last watch  
bronze worn where our first shadows seamed  
morning mirror broken bride  
embroidered sash unlaces on the hearthstone  

the spring silkworm spun its chamber shut  
silk wound against a bridal drum untouched
red wax sealed—spent wick weeps into the stele  

beside the moonlit sill the brush-knife cleaves the charred core  
the seal breaks at midnight  
a single scent of eaglewood rises  
Kunlun incense  
rain on Kunlun has fallen for thirty years  
water settles Kunlun-hore 
the rain not yet wet
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Singh Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 11:23 PM
A nice poem on fading beauty of love and marriage.The picture is superb.A fav.
Winter Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 7:34 PM
Dearest Daniel, a mysterious and beautiful imagery. I believe that this poem is inspired by japanese literature. They say that the heart wants what it wants. Sometimes the heart yearns yet we go on with life with discipline while keeping the yearning burning in our heart like an incense. With love and respect always, Anne
Anaya Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Perhaps the heart is not meant to rest, whilst it does, it longs & longs. Yet she disciplines in life's rules & codes "Kunlun incense"—brilliant I thought — the mountain is a symbol of eternal life & spiritual enlightenment, making it a pivotal element in various myths & legend I read maybe in the Himalayas. A sadness, I interpret as a sort of purgatory. Good read, Daniel, a new discovery, for me, & of metaphors enjoyed. Blessings :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Not sure what Kunlun is. But this has great imagery and mysterious atmosphere
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 6:35 PM
Your quotes are awesome! Love your imagery…as always, each line longs to be devoured.
Hind Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 1:36 PM
this is as mysterious as it is broken, just beautiful
Cunningham Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 10:22 PM
Quite an eerie foreboding scene you've created here Daniel, it feels like something bad is going to happen. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 12:20 PM
What a write/story/quote/picture you have here. I like this shorter write from you. The picture seems to have many writes in it. Will you write more on it??? Have a Lovely/Blessed Day Writing Away............
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