Kryptonite

Looking back, I don't feel so bad
there wasn't much I could do.
Even all the superheros 
couldn't save me from you.

Captain America's shield
couldn't have stopped the pain.
All my efforts to understand you
were all in vain.

Not even Thor's hammer 
could keep you from me.
You always came back
and could never let me be.

Even if I possessed
the Hulk's pure strength,
I couldn't stay away
for any great length.

Wonder Woman's lasso
couldn't get past your outer shell.
Your real feelings and emotions
you were never willing to tell.

Wolverines Adamantium claws 
couldn't have made you stay.
No matter how tight I held on
you were able to rip yourself away.

I thought you were my future,
Or at least my shining knight
Although it hurts to admit it,
maybe you're just my kryptonite. 

June 14, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/3/2016 6:29:00 AM
A very clever and engaging write. I enjoyed your effort very much and congratulate you on your first place win ... CayCay
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Date: 7/1/2016 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) I love the way you expressed your feelings honestly and creatively through marvel characters. Hugs, Angie
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Date: 6/25/2016 7:44:00 AM
Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your win! Jesse
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/24/2016 1:34:00 AM
Very well written Sienna. And congrats for your placement
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much for the kind words!
Date: 6/23/2016 9:58:00 PM
intriguing and unique take on the them Sienna. I guess if all those super heroes couldn't help ...... t'wren't meant to be.
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:31:00 PM
T'wren't not! :) thanks for reading!
Date: 6/23/2016 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:30:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/23/2016 6:13:00 PM
Love this Poem. Congrats!
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:30:00 PM
So glad you love it! Makes me happy :)
Date: 6/23/2016 3:51:00 PM
Fantastic! Well deserved win, Sienna!
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/23/2016 12:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Nice write.:)
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 6/23/2016 8:35:00 AM
Very good write, Sienna, congratulations on your win!!!!!!
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thanks! I appreciate it!
Date: 6/23/2016 4:21:00 AM
Congrates Sienna, great write good win.
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
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Date: 6/23/2016 4:17:00 AM
Congrats,Sienna, on your win and beautiful poem
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Date: 6/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
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