Kracken

The monster sleeps Release the kracken A ogre from down deep Straight from hell A parting of the waves Destroying all emotions With a rage filled hate an almighty roar escapes Black loveless heart parting of our ways One look from you Stone cold ice breaks Killing me cruelly without thought My warm heart bleeds The kracken's way turning cold loveless Making a stone of your heart Leave it buried in the deep Like the hounds of hell Chained to a bottomless pit Locked in the deepest depths In the chambers of your heart Only then love will shine freely

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/4/2013 5:24:00 PM

Yes, love can be a ferocious beast at times. Wreaking havoc and pain wherever it goes. Which is usually straight to the heart!....Excellent poem about how painful love can be, sometimes. Great work! Thanks for suggesting it....And, thanks for nicely commenting on my poem, "Scarred Heart". It means so much!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 3:58:00 AM

your poems are a pleasure to read thank you deeply heartfelt appreciated

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2013 6:52:00 PM

hello liam, I'll be back tonight..can't wait to see what you have this far... take care... Linda

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/25/2013 7:02:00 PM

oh you will that almost sounds promising thank you ever so softly linda you also take care so sweet