Kowtow

I see a lot of people hustle, 
I notice how they bustle. 
I sense a lot of them working ostentatiously, 
I know they are tired and hungry
Craving for success, for something new
Yet only a privilege given to a few. 
Sick of fiction, got fed up with urbanization
Are you a prisoner of your own nation?
Subordinates obey their bosses
A power that makes one weak, they possess
Will you always agree too easily?
Will you do as they say, eagerly?
You can always disagree and say 'no' 
But you can ask too, if you don't know. 
Think twice first, know when to kneel
An abused well-being is almost impossible to heal. 
You can touch your forehead on the ground
But equality is at times quite hard to be found. 
A kowtow should be a token of homage, 
A sign of deep respect regardless of age--
Not a truce of superiority, nor an act of fake worship
Of being a slave from your own shadows and steps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/25/2020 11:47:00 PM
Omg..Jessica! A pox on all the 100 who read this and left not one comment! I apologize on behalf of my very rude compatriots. This is a powerful verse with you all over it! Who gives a rip about butterflies! You, my friend punch a hole in this make believe, phony universe we traverse in. You are hand to hand combat with reality. You are sane, congratulations! This is better than POTDs! Keep penning, wake people up. Stay rigorously honest. Thank you...,Panagiita
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Jessica Alvero
Date: 7/30/2020 10:50:00 AM
This just made my day. All along, i thought no one would be able to understand what I write. But then you came along and made every word worth writing...
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Date: 7/30/2020 10:50:00 AM
Thank you so much.
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