Koplin Strong

A ten year long journey, uphill both ways, 
ended last night, toward the end of the day.
The wife of my brother, the mother of his sons,
a farewell message from the tips of their tongues.

Two young boys have now become men, 
a battle was fought and has come to its end.
In the still of the night a soul was led home, 
with our Lord Jesus Christ we are never alone.

The love for our family is second to none, 
I couldn’t be more proud, of both of these sons.
With passion and strength, they’ve completed their task, 
God please hear me now and grant what I ask.

I ask for your guidance and strength for these men,  
please light their new path and bless them again.
In these upcoming days there will be one more fight, 
please keep them strong and show them your light.

Mark Koplin
7-24-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 8/23/2023 11:07:00 PM
You have a way with words, this is so touching Mark.
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Date: 8/20/2023 3:34:00 PM
We all face difficulties, sometimes when least Expected' The only sure help is God.' A most useful write.'
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Date: 8/18/2023 8:37:00 PM
It is always painful to lose a loved one Mark and yet I see yours is a close knit family, a rarity in these days, a blessing. May the hearts of all impacted find peace again, accepting the will of God, in this world of transience.
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Date: 8/8/2023 11:28:00 AM
So sorry to hear the sad news Mark, my condolences to you and your family. You are in my prayers. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/16/2023 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your prayers.
Date: 7/25/2023 10:08:00 AM
aww Mark my heart goes out to you and the family .I know how much of a support you have been to them and will continue to support them all through such difficult days and years ahead. hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/25/2023 10:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend!
Date: 7/25/2023 9:32:00 AM
All of you have been in my thoughts and prayers since last night, Mark. It's a terrible sorrow that fills the hearts of a family who loses a loved one... wife and mother. I'm glad you were there for them. Hugs.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/25/2023 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Lin!
Date: 7/25/2023 8:14:00 AM
So beautiful yet so sad Mark….l wish them both well! Debx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/25/2023 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Deb!
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