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11/11/2023 - Komorebi Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

Photo collage by Mark Toney using Canva Pro.  Photo credit: Komorebi (sunlight through leaves in Kyoto, Japan), by holgs from Getty images Signature;  Inset photo credit: Silhouette of Man and Woman Embracing, by Jonathan Borba from Pexels;  Both photos used via Canva Pro Content License.

Komorebi - Thoughts of You

Awake another day without you here
Your gift of years so precious as my wife
I still can hear your voice so crystal clear
That sound a treasured echo of a life
I hurry out of bed to be on time
With thoughts of us together oh so grand
Arriving at our special place sublime
I close my eyes and see us hand in hand
This secret wooded place was ours to share
Fresh sunlight filtered through the leaves of trees
Our early morning rendezvous so dear
It’s timeless message strengthens one who grieves 
   Look for the light while passing through shadows
   Aware that shafts of light quench life’s salvos
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Fowler Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 9:13 AM
I think your sonnet is beautiful Mark. A sweet tribute for your wife. Your special place is a comforting place where you draw strength. Very nice! :)
Toney Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 12:31 PM
I appreciate your gracious comment, Linda Alice.
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