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Komorebi karma

Dull clouds are backdrop for another dreary day Glancing around, he sets off on his daily walk Tree umbrellas cast dark shadows across woodland floors Mist swirls around trunks, glides across glades He walks on as shafts of sunlight beckon change Clouds recede, warmth and light strengthen Bright streaks pierce treescape He marvels at shadows dancing with light Such spontaneous pleasure warms body and soul Reminds him life is too short to live in shadows Komorebi karma strikes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *10th Place* Komorebi Contest Dec 2023 Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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Date: 12/3/2023 5:02:00 AM
hello, i don't think i've read your work before, but i really enjoyed this, it's very good - congrats on your win in craig's contest!
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Simon Rogerson
Date: 12/3/2023 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte with so many Soupers its impossible to read more than a very small number of the poems which appear each day!

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