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"Koalas Extinction"

Koala bear tears Eucalyptus tree downfall A Greenhouse effect

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Date: 3/19/2010 5:58:00 AM
oh, this indeed makes me very sad. excellent haiku. thanks for your kind congrats on my shared win in Debbie's contest, much appreciated. best wishes, shar
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Date: 2/17/2010 10:17:00 AM
so sad
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Date: 2/15/2010 4:16:00 PM
a coala ..such a peaceful animal .. and yet it is dangered by extinction .. nice haiku ..thanks for the comment on my written " writing blind " ..marco
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Date: 2/10/2010 9:52:00 PM
I love Panda bears and have quiet a collection of different stuffed and ceramic bears. My daughter and I split a $500 bingo pot last Saturday night. Thanks for the input on the poem and congrats on Randy. They are two of my favorites. Have you read Crossroads or the Yellow? Let me know what you think. I really like your flow and rhyme too. Ellen
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Date: 2/4/2010 10:20:00 AM
We are destroying are fellow creatures. You expressed this terrible thing in your well wrought haiku. I belong to the National Wildlife Foundation and i hope that helps matters. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:35:00 PM
Good luck in Brian's contest Ravindra
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Date: 1/31/2010 6:32:00 PM
What a beautiful line bearing the heart touching agonies of this very beautiful lovely creature. I really love Koala. What more the Greenhouse gases would effect disturbing the Nature to the extent I too have tried to sketch in my Poem 'Wake up O' but you have sketched everything and more in three words. This is really excellent. love Ravindra
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Date: 1/31/2010 4:31:00 PM
Dear John Moses, This is a Winner to me any animal on the Endangered List is Always Good subject matter I wrote a POEM about Bald Eagles Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments, Greatly Appreciated I was wondering why YOU did not Comment on my 2 POEMS -- "Charmaine" and "Sara" Senryu Tributes Right now all is well with my "NEW" Computer Blessings to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:23:00 AM
Great haiku! Wonderful for the contest!
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Date: 1/28/2010 10:47:00 PM
Hello. I couldnt send you soup mail - You asked if I look Choctaw-Apache and yes I do. I do have a Facebook acct at scarlettanderson61@yahoo.com I have photos posted there of my,family,PowWow, Native Am photos. 6 albums total right now. And a link to learn more about my Tribe. I read EVERYONE of your poems on your site and loved the photos too. Thank you for your support and kind comments for reading my material and sharing your talent Halito!
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Date: 1/26/2010 4:01:00 PM
Sad but true and beautifully done true to the form!! I don't think I have the day/month for your birthday (don't need to know the year) to add to my calendar ... or maybe I just can't find it right now. Thanks for your recent comment ... its much appreciated ... smile
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Date: 1/26/2010 3:05:00 PM
John, i just adore Koala bears > there is something so cute about them, and they ain't even bears > they are arboreal marsupials > but bears is kool for me. Good luck in Brian's contest >> James
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:58:00 PM
Lets keep the Sweet Koalas safe,good message in this Haiku ,indeed..Charma
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:02:00 PM
Is the bear tearing down the tree (V)..koala is a description of the bear the type of bear ..adjective..as is Eucalyptus a type of tree (Adjectives are words that describe or modify another person or thing in the sentence.) Greenhouse as you use it is a discription of the effect..which is a noun..LOL..NO worries I don't think I did it either! HUGS
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:46:00 PM
wow was this a hard one aye? I'da say tears is a verb LOL....and ya gots adjectives too. Believe me I didn't have better luck! Light & Love
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Date: 1/25/2010 1:38:00 PM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:29:00 PM
I like this one shows you have a soft heart
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:56:00 AM
Nothing sweeter looking than a Koala bear... and a Koala bear crying, heartbreaking... this a reminder of the destruction to nature... wonderful writing.. and thanks so much for your comment on my poetry..
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:50:00 PM
Save the koala bears! I belong to the National Wildlife federation. Fine work! Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/23/2010 5:22:00 PM
Yes, the greenhouse effect and old growth logging are issues that need careful consideration. thank you for your congrats on my "Blue Heaven"...Margaret
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:39:00 PM
well i guess i start with you.My goal is to thank everyone of you individuley.Sorry if I don't get you all,but it's my goal for now.
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Date: 1/23/2010 1:05:00 PM
short and powerful poetry, loved reading it and will read more of as well. Have a great weekend.:)
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:08:00 PM
very nice.One of these days I will learn how to do this type of poem Hope all is well.
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:00:00 AM
short, simple, powerful, enjoy your weekend. :)
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Date: 1/22/2010 1:06:00 PM
good one! hope you will win! you are most welcome about your contest!!
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