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trying a different style  =]

Thou hast my love and I desire thine. Dost thou know or knowing, care? I keep the nymph's lonely station. But my impatience grows savage. If thou carest not, my love the stars will keep their motion flowers will still need water I will learn stillness the feeling will rust

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Date: 7/6/2020 1:28:00 PM
Very effective tone to convey message. You excelled with this snippet of sentiment.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/6/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thank you =]
Date: 7/3/2020 10:39:00 PM
Being impatient myself, the stillness is not a given.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/4/2020 1:51:00 PM
I will LEARN stillness.. maybe with the help of duct tape? =]

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