Know Your Knowledge:

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Knowledge is the path up the mountain, We may know the path so well, But the mountain remains a mystery!

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/15/2017 3:32:00 PM

Hello White Wolf. I will not speak of form I will leave that up to you and to others. What I can say and will say is how clever and creative not to mention original to combine or entwine knowledge and mountain. I found this original. Honestly. Well done entirely. And yes we readers have been warned.

White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 6:06:00 PM

Thank you once again, Lisa /|\

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 2/4/2017 1:22:00 PM

It's an endless path, but such a fulfilling one! :)

White Wolf
Date: 3/15/2017 6:04:00 PM

A path that circles around the mountain? Haha /|\

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/2/2017 7:45:00 PM

What a powerfully written Senryu, White Wolf. So much said in so few words! A 7 and Fav for me! Sandra

White Wolf
Date: 2/2/2017 7:50:00 PM

Thank you very much for the comment, Sandra, I appreciate it /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/1/2017 3:11:00 AM

Man's first step towards knowledge is to accept his ignorance dear, White Wolf! Well written.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/1/2017 4:45:00 AM

Just to remind you the saying of Socrates: " I know one thing that I know nothing!" As far as the Fool is concerned, I am certain you know that in his bang carries all of life's possibilities! Not to forget, I like your saying my young enthusiastic friend, White Wolf!

White Wolf
Date: 2/1/2017 3:16:00 AM

Yes, I agree, I have a saying that goes, better to know oneself is a fool than to pretend one is not! HaHa, that is why the first card in the Tarot is the Fool that represents man! Thank you.