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Knots

Pull this knotted string to loosen the hold The links in the chain twist and tangle regardless Asked to wear this shackled existence So shiny So pretty Yet, so empty and lifeless you can't even feel me pulling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/1/2024 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/2/2019 8:04:00 PM
I like this one.
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