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Knot In My Stomach

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Just wanted to play with the feeling I get sometimes in my stomach - Make friends with it and let it know I know it's there :)

Annoying knot right in the pit
Of my stomach, please stop it!
You twist and churn with fear and dread
Echo voices in my head

Have you any clue who I am
What I'm up to as a man?
What's your job, why were you hired?
I think you suck, that's it, you're fired

Here's your pink slip, now be gone
You been here now for far too long
Sorry there's no space for you
I've simply too much left to do

I wish you well,  it's been a blast
Redecorate your room at last
Dust the Cobb webs, walls are painted 
Furniture's been re situated 

Loving life, this brand new space
Without you up in my face
Happy feeling at peace with me
At home, in love, completely free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/28/2017 8:23:00 PM
Your poems are very good. Why did you stop posting them? Are you alive?
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