Knock

it was Halloween night when she heard
 a knock on door, trick or treaters?
 Looking for treats as before,
 So she opened the door,
 A zombie stood there!
 She quickly ran
 But the beast
 just said 
 Boo!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Cute little Nonet Joseph.:)
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 11:04 PM
Love this whimsical poem
Yvonne Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Love this. Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Knock" is a fun/cute Nonet write/ending. I enjoyed it. Have Blessed Day..................
Buhagiar Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 9:52 AM
You have entered well in the spirit of Halloween, Well done. Blessings.
Greenhough Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 9:04 AM
No boo here. That was great. Happy Halloween.
Rose  Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 8:31 AM
its easy to scare someone on Halloween night lol, a very cute H. Poem, with a sweet little form, to go with it :)
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 5:20 AM
Aptly descriptive of the season, Joseph--Everyone will relate to the knock and the boo. Splendidly evocative of the scene.
Baker Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:02 AM
A fun Nonet, Joseph, I liked it! Bill
Nicole Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 5:27 PM
I can't believe it's that time of year again. Such a cute Halloween poem, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Flood Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Eek! Nice one, Joseph
Meadows Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 3:27 PM
A good Halloween poem. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 2:00 PM
- Boo ! - Great done, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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