Knock

it was Halloween night when she heard a knock on door, trick or treaters? Looking for treats as before, So she opened the door, A zombie stood there! She quickly ran But the beast just said Boo!!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/21/2023 5:50:00 AM

Cute little Nonet Joseph.:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2023 11:04:00 PM

Love this whimsical poem

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/2/2023 2:11:00 PM

Love this. Thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/2/2023 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Knock" is a fun/cute Nonet write/ending. I enjoyed it. Have Blessed Day..................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/31/2023 9:52:00 AM

You have entered well in the spirit of Halloween, Well done. Blessings.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/30/2023 9:04:00 AM

No boo here. That was great. Happy Halloween.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2023 8:31:00 AM

its easy to scare someone on Halloween night lol, a very cute H. Poem, with a sweet little form, to go with it :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2023 5:20:00 AM

Aptly descriptive of the season, Joseph--Everyone will relate to the knock and the boo. Splendidly evocative of the scene.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/30/2023 1:02:00 AM

A fun Nonet, Joseph, I liked it! Bill

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/29/2023 5:27:00 PM

I can't believe it's that time of year again. Such a cute Halloween poem, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Terry Flood

Date: 10/29/2023 4:59:00 PM

Eek! Nice one, Joseph

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/29/2023 4:49:00 PM

a delightful Halloween poem. I liked it.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/29/2023 3:27:00 PM

A good Halloween poem. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/29/2023 2:00:00 PM

- Boo ! - Great done, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs