Knit Picking


Zits!

Pus problems ... oozing wipe love,
has got them innocent bite fangs showing
That baby drac queen moon face turning
into a teenage mutant turtledove

Cold cream cyber hits

Another three-day seclusion ... 
chained to a marred model illusion
Hip adolescent Wonder Woman
changed into a square Lois — 
closing the fast lane to popularity
Matinee crash dream ten-dollar scraping
for a heart wreck, no-date solution

Beauty tips blown to bits

Anger eruption,
lava tears flowing profusely
Cooled by sisterly advice:
“Don’t pick at it, no ... 
just leave it alone, let it go”
Lonely growth spurts 
stunts a lot of 
aisle-walking linked elbows

A patient sitter keep their wits

Lost weekend,
wigging out ... undone
by an epidermal shut-in send
Death-of-the-party news
was delivered by 
best black widow friends

Prickly pimple concerns — 
premature social demise
do a solitude burn 
in an empty plastic jar urn

Fashionable facial fits

Wrinkles in time — 
appearance issues so juvenile ... hormonal crisis,
minor disaster averted
Upon mirror reflection,
ticking vanity
gave self-esteem a facelift, 
that was in necessary 
ego sore rub need

Fear obit ghosted

Halloween masks
and brown paper bags
Sour tongue wags
and mean emoji hash tags
Mall sighting scary,
peer mocking wary
Post a Photoshop pic
in the Facebook dairy

Carnival freak show weird distortion,
deemed by pride
as a public health enemy
Mono rumor was the fake text portion;
with a closet confide,
isolation was the safest entry 

Squeezed happiness ain’t legit

Lessons learned in youth
will age properly ...
if knit picked by the truth
Ugly self-image 
will fade compassionately,
given clear rite-of-passage proof

A pretty duckling gathering pearl thoughts,
spreading swan wings
And gently dispersing 
every shed tear that be hideous skin wrought

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/13/2018 5:26:00 AM
Your poetic slam rocks, Freddy.. you have a way with words sir!
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Date: 7/12/2018 11:52:00 AM
electrifying fashion twisters, fred... love the slam... huggs
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:38:00 AM
Get busy living ... or die trying, people. Thus saith he with grasshopper eyes, as he contemplates the next leap. Romantic Warrior
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