Knight Mare

I miss you most 'twixt dusk and dawn
Wondering where you might have gone
Like Little Bo Peep
I'm stuck counting sheep
Thinking of you with nothing on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lawrence Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 6:41 AM
I love your mind Rico ! An endless inexhaustible creative place where amazing limericks are born !! Hugs my friend, Susan :)
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Thank you for the inspiration! Nice to hear from you again! I hope all is going well with your new business venture! Aloha 'oe!
M  Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 2:27 AM
You are a funny clever man Rico and very naughty!! Enjoyed….Debx
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Mahalo, Deb! Aloha!
George Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:39 PM
The last line tells it all.
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:16 AM
Mahalo, Valsa! Aloha!
Bauer Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Ha! This one is adorable, Rico!
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:17 AM
I am always impressed by your ability to find le mot juste, but "adorable"? Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 3:38 PM
naughty and cute.
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Mahalo, Andrea! Aloha!
Volumes Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 2:39 PM
What a romantic poem. So touching. Rico if the subject of your poem reads this I am sure they will come running back to you if they are able.
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Me? Romantic? You must be thinking of someone else! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Adds a bit of spice to the story. Lol Tom
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:18 AM
Mahalo, Tom! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Nice one, Rico. You have a real talent for these. I enjoy them.
Leffanta Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Mahalo! I continue practising! Aloha!
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