Ronald D Thompson Poet Monorhyme

Kitty and the Kitten

Kitty shouldn’t keep the kitten Kitty couldn’t keep, 
But Kitty would’ve kept the kitten pity shouldn’t reap.
If Kitty would’ve kept the kitten, Kitty wouldn’t weep, 
And Kitty would’ve kept the kitten Kitty would upkeep.


Twist my tongue poetry contest
13th January 2020
Sponsor:   Nina Parmenter

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Lindsay Laurie January 27, 2020 at 4:37 PM G'day Ronald … what a ripper of a tongue twister Ronald - thank you - Lindsay Ronald D Thompson January 27, 2020 at 4:40 PM Never tried a tongue twister before so your comment is very much appreciated. Ron :)

Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 8:02 PM Congrats! Ronald D Thompson January 27, 2020 at 4:38 PM Appreciated Kim. Best wishes..Ron

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:19 PM Cool tongue twister, Ronald. Congrats on second place! Ronald D Thompson January 27, 2020 at 4:38 PM Thanks Andrea..Ron :)

Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 1:57 PM what a fabulous tongue twister, many congrats Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf January 21, 2020 at 8:11 PM Hey, my friend, you are on a roll! Congrats on a podium finish in a highly competitive contest! Cheerio, and Cheers! ~ Gershon Ronald D Thompson January 22, 2020 at 3:48 PM Think I was lucky Gershon. Thanks for the post, really appreciated. Ron :)

Line Gauthier January 21, 2020 at 7:28 PM Sounds perfectly logical to me, Ronald. Congrats on your podium finish. Ronald D Thompson January 22, 2020 at 3:47 PM Appreciated Line. Best wishes...Ron :)

Nick Bagnall January 21, 2020 at 5:28 PM Super, nice rhythm, nice repetition, congrats on the placement Ronald D Thompson January 21, 2020 at 5:31 PM Thanks Nick. Best wishes...Ron

Richard Lamoureux January 21, 2020 at 4:23 PM Cute and fun. Congrats on your high placement. Ronald D Thompson January 21, 2020 at 4:26 PM Thanks Richard. Appreciate the comment...Ron :)

Paula Goldsmith January 21, 2020 at 2:00 PM What a kitty win. Good write. Enjoy your day writing........................ Ronald D Thompson January 21, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thank you Paula. Ron :)

Chris Green January 16, 2020 at 4:49 PM Wow, that was great. I see a first place for this one my friend. Very clever and witty (which rhymes with kitty) :) Ronald D Thompson January 16, 2020 at 4:54 PM Not sure about first Chris but really appreciate your comment. Ron :)

Line Gauthier January 13, 2020 at 10:45 PM What a fun poem Ronald. Sounds like a winner to me! Ronald D Thompson January 14, 2020 at 4:06 PM Thanks Line, appreciated..Ron :)

Gershon Wolf January 13, 2020 at 8:00 PM By the last line, I just couldn't 'keep up' anymore. Good fun! Smiles, Gershon Ronald D Thompson January 14, 2020 at 4:05 PM Pleased it flummoxed you Gershon, in the nicest way!! Best wishes..Ron :)