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Kitty and the kitten

Kitty shouldn’t keep the kitten Kitty couldn’t keep, But Kitty would’ve kept the kitten pity shouldn’t reap. If Kitty would’ve kept the kitten, Kitty wouldn’t weep, And Kitty would’ve kept the kitten Kitty would upkeep. Twist my tongue poetry contest 13th January 2020 Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 1/27/2020 4:37:00 PM
G'day Ronald … what a ripper of a tongue twister Ronald - thank you - Lindsay
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Ronald D Thompson
Date: 1/27/2020 4:40:00 PM
Never tried a tongue twister before so your comment is very much appreciated. Ron :)
Date: 1/23/2020 8:02:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/27/2020 4:38:00 PM
Appreciated Kim. Best wishes..Ron
Date: 1/23/2020 7:19:00 PM
Cool tongue twister, Ronald. Congrats on second place!
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Date: 1/27/2020 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Andrea..Ron :)
Date: 1/23/2020 1:57:00 PM
what a fabulous tongue twister, many congrats Ronald:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/21/2020 8:11:00 PM
Hey, my friend, you are on a roll! Congrats on a podium finish in a highly competitive contest! Cheerio, and Cheers! ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:48:00 PM
Think I was lucky Gershon. Thanks for the post, really appreciated. Ron :)
Date: 1/21/2020 7:28:00 PM
Sounds perfectly logical to me, Ronald. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:47:00 PM
Appreciated Line. Best wishes...Ron :)
Date: 1/21/2020 5:28:00 PM
Super, nice rhythm, nice repetition, congrats on the placement
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Date: 1/21/2020 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Nick. Best wishes...Ron
Date: 1/21/2020 4:23:00 PM
Cute and fun. Congrats on your high placement.
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Date: 1/21/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Richard. Appreciate the comment...Ron :)
Date: 1/21/2020 2:20:00 PM
This is brilliant and I love the rhythm of it! So clever! I got it flawlessly on the third or fourth go and then it got stuck in my head lol! Richly deserved second place Ronald - congrats!
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Date: 1/21/2020 2:27:00 PM
I'm truly honoured Nina. Glad you enjoyed. Best wishes...Ron :)
Date: 1/21/2020 2:00:00 PM
What a kitty win. Good write. Enjoy your day writing........................
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Date: 1/21/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Paula. Ron :)
Date: 1/16/2020 4:49:00 PM
Wow, that was great. I see a first place for this one my friend. Very clever and witty (which rhymes with kitty) :)
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Date: 1/16/2020 4:54:00 PM
Not sure about first Chris but really appreciate your comment. Ron :)
Date: 1/13/2020 10:45:00 PM
What a fun poem Ronald. Sounds like a winner to me!
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Date: 1/14/2020 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Line, appreciated..Ron :)
Date: 1/13/2020 8:00:00 PM
By the last line, I just couldn't 'keep up' anymore. Good fun! Smiles, Gershon
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Date: 1/14/2020 4:05:00 PM
Pleased it flummoxed you Gershon, in the nicest way!! Best wishes..Ron :)