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Kittens

Cuddly little balls of fluff climbing up my toes Before I know what's happening, one's licking my nose! Playful little bundles of joy A little one bats at it's toy I love spending time With these sweet little kittens One's got little white paws- I think we'll call her Mittens! What I love about cats Is easy to understand I love their little soft meows and their fluffy coats are grand! I could spend my life surrounded by kittens What better place to be? Kitten here, and kitten there, kittens as far as I can see! Some people say kittens are snooty- why, you just have to get to know 'em! So the next time you are asked "Why do you love cats?" Just show them this poem! 1/10/17

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Date: 2/6/2017 10:23:00 PM
Very nice poem, Hannah, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/15/2017 2:16:00 AM
Quaint, with one foot in the rhyme pool, would benefit from precise meter and solid formatting, to enhance the flow, it feels like you have down played the phrasing for a younger audience, decent write, but you have better writes in store...Ian
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Hannah Mcmann
Date: 1/15/2017 6:27:00 AM
Yes, this poem was definitely aiming for a younger audience. Also, it was supposed to have a childlike joy about it. Thank you very much for your view of the poem. -XOXO Hannah

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