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Kitty in Butterfly Garden They say I’m curious, but what of these? These strange miniature beautiful things! They flutter like aqua leaves in the breeze. How fragile they seem with soft powder wings. These strange miniature beautiful things! They fell like petals that snatched blue from sky. How fragile they seem with soft powder wings. Not giving them chase, among them I lie. They fell like petals that snatched blue from sky down to the ground where they now surround me. Not giving them chase, among them I lie in this garden of them, grown magically. Down to the ground where they now surround me, they flutter like aqua leaves in the breeze in this garden of them, grown magically. They say I’m curious, but what of these? March 15, 2016

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Date: 3/29/2016 9:37:00 AM
Wow, you painted me such a beautiful serene picture.
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea:} loved your write. "They fell like petals that snatched blue from sky" - really beautiful:}
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:54:00 AM
Oh I really like this! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:55:00 PM
Andrea, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:45:00 PM
Awww this is so sweet Andrea. Congratulations on your high placement! ; )
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Date: 3/20/2016 10:06:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations ... this one is still one of my favorites, and I'm glad Eve placed it high. So eloquently worded.
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:16:00 AM
Yes, you are curious dear with aqua leaves. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:46:00 PM
How beautiful, Andrea. This is such a lovely write.
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:12:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 3/19/2016 7:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. This is such a wonderfully flowing piece. This is actually looking through a kittens eyes. This is a touching piece of poetry. I so Love nature in its many forms. This poem does go into my faves and it is a seven rating for me. Excellent....MKE.
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Date: 3/19/2016 6:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Wow, An eloquent and observant Kitten's-eye-view--that is quite amazing integration of the butterflies theme. Nice. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:58:00 PM
well done congrats
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:54:00 PM
Congrats!!! ( ( ( ) ) ) Sara
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:10:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2016 4:01:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/19/2016 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea,for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/18/2016 8:12:00 AM
Kittens and butterflies, what a wonderful mix, they make a magical poem.
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:16:00 PM
Andrea, oh this is enchanting, a splendid poem to match the images, wonderful, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/17/2016 3:51:00 PM
Such beautiful personification and I love the aqua leave image - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:33:00 PM
Aint cats strange. They will attack a squirrel that can fight back, but go to sleep by a butterfly. Oh, this is so sensitive and tender. Love it, love it. Love you, daver
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:22:00 PM
Excellent, Andrea ... just excellent. You make this form feel super natural ... love how you brought out the curiosity of the cat AND the butterflies. Aqua leaves? Never heard that one before ... very pretty. Mine was humorous, but I broke a lot of rules, and didn't incorporate a steady rhyme (or even consistent line lengths) ....
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:26:00 PM
What a nice poem! I have written pantoums myself. I believe the form is from Malaysia. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:28:00 PM
I can so picture this Andrea. My youngest has a cat and it is so adorable.
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:39:00 PM
Cute personification, Andrea. I like the 'aqua leaves in the breeze' imagery! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/16/2016 2:15:00 PM
- I can see it is curious and playful ... lovely Andrea! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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