Kim Rodrigues Poet Curtal Sonnet

Kith and Kin

Whether mine sails in torrents, or sunshine,
can walk on water or sinks beneath waves,
hubs always succeeds to lift me up.

Children, like flagons of ludicrous wine,
their knotty, cynical, humor I crave.
My reflection whirls in cherished cups.

Hours spent, biggety list, sugar-cubed day.
Galbreaths intertwine in how we’ve been brave
or not; with emotive eyes, catch up.

Circle’s animated ~ in God’s olé
friendwave.

10/30/2010

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Gershon Wolf October 31, 2020 at 8:30 PM And here I read 'Kith and Kim' when I eyed it, but actually that wasn't too far off. Blood IS thicker than water, for sure. Cheers, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger October 31, 2020 at 4:07 PM A gorgeous poem in content and word choices. "their knotty, cynical, humor I crave." loved this part the best!

Linda Alice Fowler October 31, 2020 at 6:38 AM Lovely write Kim. hugs {} Linda Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thank you! Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2020 at 10:03 AM Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar October 31, 2020 at 2:04 AM We must always relish our families. ~~ Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2020 at 5:36 AM We must ~ hugs...Kim

Susan Ashley October 30, 2020 at 9:00 PM Kim, your imagery is filled with the magic of your imagery that never fails to leave me enchanted. Beautiful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2020 at 5:36 AM Thank you, Susan!

Tom Cunningham October 30, 2020 at 2:36 PM Your family are everything Kim Enjoy your weekend Tom Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2020 at 7:11 PM Thank you, Tom! You as well!

Silent One October 30, 2020 at 9:49 AM I have never done this form before... seems like an interesting one.. I see the connection between you and your family in this piece.. Kim Rodrigues October 30, 2020 at 12:36 PM My first time! Give it a try :)