Kite Tale

brisk boisterous wind
throws the joyous kite so high
caught by crescent moon
trailing twirling tail
toddler tugs the moon along
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Beautiful tanka Kimberly...I love the last line...
Shaw Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Hi Joseph! Thank you for the kind encouragement. Hugs, Kimberly
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 3:12 PM
beautifully creative Kimberly and some lovely alliteration:-) Hugs Jan xx
Shaw Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 4:07 PM
Thank you Jan! So lovely of you to drop in and leave a nice comment. Hugs, Kimberly xx
Pinet Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 12:43 PM
You've created a well thought out and imaginative picture that floats within our conscious minds. Emile. #7
Shaw Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Hello Emile! Thank you so much for the seven. I truly appreciate your review and welcome all advice, as I am very new to poetry. Hugs, Kimberly
Wigley Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 11:45 AM
A great poetic form for the subject,Kimberly- makes the Kite jink along in short bursts. Good fun. Mister Viv x
Shaw Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:54 PM
Hi Viv! Thank you for that keen insight. I had not thought of the 'movement' that the form creates. I appreciate your kind comments. hugs, Kimberly
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