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Kite Soars Away N-A

Tailed kite Drifting higher Grand sight Thrill crowd Gather around Peals loud Wind blew Tug, pull, line breaks Shed tear 4/15/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2020 1:48:00 AM

This is fragile, delicate like a kite. Nice.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/16/2020 2:38:00 PM

Poor little kite. At least it had a chance to fly. ;0)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/15/2020 11:46:00 PM

Always a risk when flying a kite - like the risks we face every day but we keep trying. So thought provoking Eve. Be well.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/15/2020 10:22:00 PM

Eve, Flying a kite is not for the feint of heart. Just ask Charlie Brown. Lovely write in a Spring Rhyme, especially for the changing weather and times. -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/15/2020 4:48:00 PM

Impressive dearest, Eve! Good luck. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas

Date: 4/15/2020 1:17:00 AM

Sometimes nature is like a strict principal keeping everything under her control..She will not allow ambitious kites souring far far above..Good entry.. Good luck int he contest Eve..