Kite

O Lord  in hope I fly ,my heart, I cling
How high my kite
How thin  the string

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/13/2017 6:08:00 AM

Print it up, frame me and hang it above my desk! Beautifully expressed sentiment, Jannie. Love ... CayCay

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/27/2017 12:45:00 PM

I am finding more and different meaning to this poem as it applies to my life thank you.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/28/2017 12:28:00 AM

You are so very very kind. The gratitude is mine

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/6/2017 5:46:00 PM

Amazing piece of work. Wishful into actual.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/7/2017 8:30:00 AM

Hi Patricia, thank you for your visits. I will reciprocate. I am very happy you liked it

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/8/2017 5:08:00 AM

Good Morning Jannie. I turned to this entry from its title. It invites the reader to turn the page. I love the concept of the kite and being free and gliding. Your entry did not disappoint. It is lovely. Honestly. Enjoy the morning and day.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/7/2017 8:28:00 AM

Hi Lisa. I'm so happy for your visit and kind words. Thank you

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/1/2017 10:21:00 AM

Nice.

Robert Warlov

Date: 5/23/2017 1:06:00 PM

But what's love without strings? : )

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/14/2017 12:03:00 PM

Oh, but the strings of the heart are extraordinarily strong, if rooted in love, and such beautiful music they play! Love this one, buddy - as I love all of your work. Haven't seen you "around" of late - I pray all is well.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/14/2017 3:16:00 PM

I wasnt till you came around. Fall down up again. Here I am . Going on . Thank you for the profound encouragement. Will come by soon

Maria Williams

Date: 5/5/2017 4:23:00 AM

Great verse and great thought behind the verse Jannie. As Victor said below it's how strong the string is. Spider's webs are stronger than steel as you would know. Thanks for sharing the insite...Maria

Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/7/2017 11:27:00 AM

Yes I heard such things Maria. I am so happy for your visit and comment