Kite

O Lord  in hope I fly ,my heart, I cling
How high my kite
How thin  the string

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CayCay Godwin

November 13, 2017 at 6:08 AM

Print it up, frame me and hang it above my desk! Beautifully expressed sentiment, Jannie. Love ... CayCay

Patricia Cresswell

September 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM

I am finding more and different meaning to this poem as it applies to my life thank you.

Jannie Breedt

September 28, 2017 at 12:28 AM

You are so very very kind. The gratitude is mine

Patricia Cresswell

August 6, 2017 at 5:46 PM

Amazing piece of work. Wishful into actual.

Jannie Breedt

August 7, 2017 at 8:30 AM

Hi Patricia, thank you for your visits. I will reciprocate. I am very happy you liked it

Lisa Ricci

June 8, 2017 at 5:08 AM

Good Morning Jannie. I turned to this entry from its title. It invites the reader to turn the page. I love the concept of the kite and being free and gliding. Your entry did not disappoint. It is lovely. Honestly. Enjoy the morning and day.

Jannie Breedt

August 7, 2017 at 8:28 AM

Hi Lisa. I'm so happy for your visit and kind words. Thank you

Scott Thirtyseven

June 1, 2017 at 10:21 AM

Nice.

Robert Warlov

May 23, 2017 at 1:06 PM

But what's love without strings? : )

Gregory Richard Barden

May 14, 2017 at 12:03 PM

Oh, but the strings of the heart are extraordinarily strong, if rooted in love, and such beautiful music they play! Love this one, buddy - as I love all of your work. Haven't seen you "around" of late - I pray all is well.

Jannie Breedt

May 14, 2017 at 3:16 PM

I wasnt till you came around. Fall down up again. Here I am . Going on . Thank you for the profound encouragement. Will come by soon

Maria Williams

May 5, 2017 at 4:23 AM

Great verse and great thought behind the verse Jannie. As Victor said below it's how strong the string is. Spider's webs are stronger than steel as you would know. Thanks for sharing the insite...Maria

Jannie Breedt

May 7, 2017 at 11:27 AM

Yes I heard such things Maria. I am so happy for your visit and comment