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O Lord in hope I fly ,my heart, I cling How high my kite How thin the string

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/13/2017 6:08:00 AM
Print it up, frame me and hang it above my desk! Beautifully expressed sentiment, Jannie. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 9/27/2017 12:45:00 PM
I am finding more and different meaning to this poem as it applies to my life thank you.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/28/2017 12:28:00 AM
You are so very very kind. The gratitude is mine
Date: 8/6/2017 5:46:00 PM
Amazing piece of work. Wishful into actual.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/7/2017 8:30:00 AM
Hi Patricia, thank you for your visits. I will reciprocate. I am very happy you liked it
Date: 6/8/2017 5:08:00 AM
Good Morning Jannie. I turned to this entry from its title. It invites the reader to turn the page. I love the concept of the kite and being free and gliding. Your entry did not disappoint. It is lovely. Honestly. Enjoy the morning and day.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 8/7/2017 8:28:00 AM
Hi Lisa. I'm so happy for your visit and kind words. Thank you
Date: 6/1/2017 10:21:00 AM
Nice.
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Date: 5/23/2017 1:06:00 PM
But what's love without strings? : )
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Date: 5/14/2017 12:03:00 PM
Oh, but the strings of the heart are extraordinarily strong, if rooted in love, and such beautiful music they play! Love this one, buddy - as I love all of your work. Haven't seen you "around" of late - I pray all is well.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/14/2017 3:16:00 PM
I wasnt till you came around. Fall down up again. Here I am . Going on . Thank you for the profound encouragement. Will come by soon
Date: 5/5/2017 4:23:00 AM
Great verse and great thought behind the verse Jannie. As Victor said below it's how strong the string is. Spider's webs are stronger than steel as you would know. Thanks for sharing the insite...Maria
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/7/2017 11:27:00 AM
Yes I heard such things Maria. I am so happy for your visit and comment
Date: 5/2/2017 2:00:00 PM
I totally agree with Darren. This is priceless. A fav. :)
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/3/2017 1:07:00 AM
That is so nice from you and Darren. Thank you Carol
Date: 4/30/2017 11:06:00 PM
I don't care what the verse form is, this is just a little gem.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/1/2017 2:06:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Darren