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Kitchen Is Open

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Kitchen Is Open A Hawaiian sun blisters fine grains of beached sand, unaware to some assured wandering of tender soles stumbled swiftly altering run judiciously Prepared bodies rotisserie spirals evenly baked oily skins glistened among beads of slippery sweats gliding loosely suitably turning perhaps sleepy retreat reading Dripping sunlight rising sunbathers the conclusive plunge followed by towel rubdowns prompt a thorough cleanup by everybody there final examination kitchen's closed. 2021 January 13 *1st Place* Trinet ~~Joseph May

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Eve Roper
Date: 1/20/2021 3:04:00 AM
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William, great imagery and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/20/2021 10:51:00 AM
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Thank you, Eve, so kind of you to say my friend, Aloha!
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2021 12:10:00 PM
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I'm not a sun worshiper lol your second stanza made me smile:-) many congrats on your win William:-) hugs Jan xx
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2021 2:02:00 PM
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Thank you, Jan, your natural essence speaks volumes my friend, Aloha!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 1/19/2021 8:37:00 AM
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So nicely put by you William....Congrats on your win :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/19/2021 1:53:00 PM
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Thank you, Carol, and have yourself a nice day my friend, Aloha!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/18/2021 5:13:00 PM
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Nice depiction of a day at the beach William, Congrats on your win
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/18/2021 5:23:00 PM
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Thank you, Joseph, for the wondrous opportunity my friend, Aloha!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/13/2021 8:17:00 PM
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Sunbathers have never had a more lovely tribute William!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/13/2021 9:30:00 PM
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Thank you, Caren, back from the holi's bearing my el natur'l tan--hoping us a better year, Aloha!

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