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Katie put some chicken kebabs in the fridge, then kicked off her tight shoes. The kettle boiled and she made kiwi fruit tea. Her cute kitten climbed onto her knee and fell fast asleep. K Pleiades Contest Sponsored by Kim Merryman Checked with How Many Syllables 03~09~17

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John Michaels

Date: 3/20/2017 4:35:00 PM

A sweet little entry! Did the picture inspire the poem or vice versa? Well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:22:00 PM

I write my poems and then find the picture John:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2017 10:05:00 AM

As you know, I'm a coffee drinker, Jan, but I would not mind trying out this kiwi fruit tea which you mention in this lovely winning Pleiades. Congratulations! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:22:00 PM

I don't like kiwi fruit so I wouldn't try it Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 3/14/2017 4:23:00 AM

Congratulations Jan, fantastic Pleiades, well deserved win, :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 4:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Jan :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/13/2017 10:46:00 PM

Very cozy kitchen scene - congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/13/2017 10:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Maria Williams

Date: 3/13/2017 6:57:00 PM

A good wholesome read. Chicken kebabs and Kiwi tea sounds good. I can imagine the warm kitchen

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Maria:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/13/2017 5:59:00 PM

Congratulations Jan!! :) well done sweet friend!! Big Hugggs deb

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:24:00 PM

Thanks Deb:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2017 5:05:00 PM

A piece of everyday life portrayed in so few words! A warm and cozy write, especially the kitten. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thanks so muhc Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/11/2017 10:07:00 PM

So sweet:-) This is fabulous Jan, you just make it seem easy as it is so delightful to read yet I am aware of just how challenging It is to write.:-) ..kiwi tea is a new one to me.:-) Splendid writing, a pleasure to read. many blessings to you, lynn

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2017 5:26:00 PM

Thanks so much Lynn I googled kiwi fruit tea its not something I would try as I don't like the fruit lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2017 8:05:00 PM

ahhh, So sweet, Jan. One of the better ones. I know she loves them extended like one long sentence! So you say kebabs and not Kabobs?

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2017 7:32:00 AM

Yes we say kebabs:-) I do enjoy the challenges Kim sets us:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/9/2017 11:13:00 PM

love it good luck in the contest ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2017 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/9/2017 8:33:00 PM

:) Lovely, dear...Kiwi fruit tea. hmmmmmm...wonder what it tastes like. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2017 7:35:00 AM

I love fruit teas but I don't like Kiwi fruit so I wouldn't try that flavour:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/9/2017 8:26:00 PM

Oh! You have written a short story with very few lines... Really a great work Jan...The pic is so apt... Reads like a winner...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2017 7:35:00 AM

I do enjoy the challenges Kim sets us Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett

Date: 3/9/2017 5:23:00 PM

Brilliant Pleiades Jan, this such a clever piece, really like, good luck in the contest, Roy. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thanks Roy they are quite a challenge to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/9/2017 3:50:00 PM

Very nice Jan...hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 3:59:00 PM

Thanks Joseph it is quite a challenge using the letter K:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/9/2017 2:52:00 PM

Awe, I really love this one, Jan! Great little story line here! Good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 2:57:00 PM

Thanks Laura it is quite a challenge Kim has set us I found J and K quite difficult to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2017 12:49:00 PM

- Lovely written, Jan - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 1:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 3/9/2017 12:39:00 PM

Lovely peaceful pleiades. GL in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/9/2017 12:25:00 PM

Awww. Jan this is so sweet! Well done. Good flow! Never had kiwi tea but sounds healing!;) Good luck in the contest!! Big Hugggs and love. deb

Jan Allison
Date: 3/9/2017 1:38:00 PM

I googled kiwi fruit tea lol ... i do drink fruit teas but I don't like kiwi fruits so I wouldn't bother trying that particular flavour. :-) hugs Jan xx