Bernard Chan | + Follow Poet |
Ottava rima | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

Kissing Snowflakes

Like ballerinas airdropped from on high, 
Snowflakes pirouette to damask the air, 
Tutued geometries dimpling the sky, 
Veil our stinging eyes with arabesque fair. 
Downy fields we walk, where aureoles tide, 
And white breaths upon your face softly flare. 
As my swooning kiss to your frail smile dips, 
A wayward prism alights upon your lips.

Copyright © Bernard Chan | Year Posted 2018

Please Login to post a comment

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/30/2018 6:08:00 PM Hello Bernard, I like this poem you wrote.I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/30/2018 6:59:00 PM Thank you very much, Darlene. Glad you enjoyed it. You have a nice evening too :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2018 10:32:00 AM Thanks for commenting on my poem! Yours is likewise enchanting! Fave! Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/22/2018 6:15:00 PM Thank you very much, Kim!

John Hamilton Date: 1/21/2018 2:03:00 PM Wonderful imagery Bernard, loved your use of not oft used words in poetry, congrats on a stellar write! Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/21/2018 7:23:00 PM Thank you very much, John!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/9/2018 12:28:00 PM WOW, this is an enjoyable poem. Sweet and tender, the imagery is flawless... The best. LINDA Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/9/2018 6:31:00 PM Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment, LINDA. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley Date: 1/8/2018 6:48:00 PM Wow Bernard! Your poem is vivid in content and vibrant in imagery. Your title is delicately beautiful and perfectly sets the tone for your gorgeous write. Your poem sparkles throughout but your last two lines are especially scintillating and outstanding. A special and spectacular write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/9/2018 2:48:00 AM Thank you, Susan!! :)

Maria Williams Date: 1/8/2018 7:11:00 AM Poetic imagination and description at it's best - you are a great wordsmith Bernard. The Snowflake is the most perfect geometric shape and no two are the same as scientifically proved. You have chosen your metaphor so well .. Enjoyed it - I am going to FAVE this ...Maria Login to Reply Bernard Chan Date: 1/8/2018 8:41:00 AM Thank you so much, Maria! Really appreciate your kind words :)