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Kissing Snowflakes

Like ballerinas airdropped from on high, Snowflakes pirouette to damask the air, Tutued geometries dimpling the sky, Veil our stinging eyes with arabesque fair. Downy fields we walk, where aureoles tide, And white breaths upon your face softly flare. As my swooning kiss to your frail smile dips, A wayward prism alights upon your lips.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/30/2018 6:08:00 PM

Hello Bernard, I like this poem you wrote.I enjoyed this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/30/2018 6:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Darlene. Glad you enjoyed it. You have a nice evening too :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/22/2018 10:32:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poem! Yours is likewise enchanting! Fave!

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/22/2018 6:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim!

John Hamilton

Date: 1/21/2018 2:03:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Bernard, loved your use of not oft used words in poetry, congrats on a stellar write!

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/21/2018 7:23:00 PM

Thank you very much, John!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2018 12:28:00 PM

WOW, this is an enjoyable poem. Sweet and tender, the imagery is flawless... The best. LINDA

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/9/2018 6:31:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment, LINDA. Much appreciated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/8/2018 6:48:00 PM

Wow Bernard! Your poem is vivid in content and vibrant in imagery. Your title is delicately beautiful and perfectly sets the tone for your gorgeous write. Your poem sparkles throughout but your last two lines are especially scintillating and outstanding. A special and spectacular write my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/9/2018 2:48:00 AM

Thank you, Susan!! :)

Maria Williams

Date: 1/8/2018 7:11:00 AM

Poetic imagination and description at it's best - you are a great wordsmith Bernard. The Snowflake is the most perfect geometric shape and no two are the same as scientifically proved. You have chosen your metaphor so well .. Enjoyed it - I am going to FAVE this ...Maria

Bernard Chan
Date: 1/8/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maria! Really appreciate your kind words :)