Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Kissing Lips

Leaning in I feel your heat
My hand touches your chest
Knowing I'm finally complete
While your essence I ingest

Kissing lips began to tremble
Warm breath sweet to taste
Time that remains memorable 
The day our souls embraced

4th place
Contest;kissing contest
Sponsor: Bobby May
Date:12/21/2019

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Anisha Dutta January 12, 2020 at 7:14 AM Kissing lips is a thrill always. Brenda Chiri January 12, 2020 at 9:32 AM Thank you Anisha!;)

John Fleming December 30, 2019 at 8:27 AM A laudable little piece, Brenda...and deserving of a high placing I might add. Lots of affection as ever. :) john Brenda Chiri December 30, 2019 at 2:21 PM John you are too kind and your visits are so welcomed!;) thank you so much!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script December 28, 2019 at 5:59 AM Ahhh, based on the comments this is a winning write!! Congrats!!! It sure sounds like one. Love it!!! Brenda Chiri December 29, 2019 at 4:12 PM Ha so glad you enjoyed it G! Would love to see more of yours!;)

Caren Krutsinger December 27, 2019 at 11:57 PM Congratulations Brenda. Well deserved win! Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:56 AM Ahhh Caren thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper December 26, 2019 at 2:41 AM Back with congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve Brenda Chiri December 28, 2019 at 1:56 AM Thank you so much Eve!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2019 at 1:28 PM - Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Brenda :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 2:31 PM Anne-Lisa thank you so much!;)

Barry Stebbings December 25, 2019 at 12:32 PM Congratulations Brenda, well derserved. // Barry Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 2:31 PM Barry thank you !;)

Charles Messina December 25, 2019 at 6:50 AM Very nice, Brenda. Congrats on your win :) Brenda Chiri December 25, 2019 at 8:31 AM Thank you so much Charles!;)

Sandra Adams December 24, 2019 at 9:39 PM beautiful...congrats on your win... :) Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:55 PM Thank you Sandy back at ya!;)

Gershon Wolf December 24, 2019 at 8:28 PM I like the way this moves from the physicality of the 'now' to the eternity of the soul. Congrats on your win, Brenda! :) gw Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:10 PM Gershon thank you and congrats to you too my friend!;)

Eve Roper December 24, 2019 at 8:25 PM another passionate write, congratulations on your win. Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 9:09 PM Thank you Eve as a congrats to you too!;)

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2019 at 6:08 PM this is beautiful, Brenda. Congrats on your win and merry Xmas eve! Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 6:10 PM Merry Christmas and thank you Andrea!;)

Bobby May December 24, 2019 at 2:57 PM Congratulations on your placement! Brenda, as Dear Heart said enchanting! Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 6:09 PM Thank you Bobby!;)

Constance La France December 24, 2019 at 11:06 AM Brenda, this is lovely and enchanting ! Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 12:47 PM Dear heart thank you so much!;) merry Christmas!;)

Gordon Mcconnell December 24, 2019 at 10:31 AM Great penning Brenda, really fine piece with nice touches of romance and sensuality. Have a happy Christmas , Blessings and hugs,Gordon Brenda Chiri December 24, 2019 at 12:47 PM Thank you so much gordon! ;)

Quoth Theraven December 23, 2019 at 2:49 PM Brenda, I love reading your beautiful poems and all the wonderful comments. There aren't enough hours in the day, though plenty of space in the heart. Good luck in the contest. -Richard Brenda Chiri December 23, 2019 at 2:56 PM Richard I know what you mean about not enough time in a day! Lol I wish I could comment on more of others work too! It is so disappointing when I can't read like I use to! Thank you so much!;)

Jenish Somadas December 22, 2019 at 10:30 PM That is a nice romantic kiss.. Best wishes in the contest.. Brenda Chiri December 23, 2019 at 2:55 PM Thank you I appreciate your read!()

Janice Canerdy December 22, 2019 at 3:40 PM So lovely and appealing, Brenda! Janice Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 3:47 PM Thank you so much Janice! I appreciate your visit!;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 22, 2019 at 10:39 AM Scrumptious soup ~x Best for a win! Warm hugs and season's blessings Brenda, xomo! Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 3:11 PM Lol thank you so much Mo much appreciated!;)

Barry Stebbings December 22, 2019 at 9:28 AM The essence of togetherness. Good luck in the contest, Brenda. // Barry Brenda Chiri December 22, 2019 at 9:55 AM Thanks Barry!;)