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Kissing Lips

Leaning in I feel your heat My hand touches your chest Knowing I'm finally complete While your essence I ingest Kissing lips began to tremble Warm breath sweet to taste Time that remains memorable The day our souls embraced 4th place Contest;kissing contest Sponsor: Bobby May Date:12/21/2019

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/12/2020 7:14:00 AM

Kissing lips is a thrill always.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thank you Anisha!;)

John Fleming

Date: 12/30/2019 8:27:00 AM

A laudable little piece, Brenda...and deserving of a high placing I might add. Lots of affection as ever. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/30/2019 2:21:00 PM

John you are too kind and your visits are so welcomed!;) thank you so much!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 12/28/2019 5:59:00 AM

Ahhh, based on the comments this is a winning write!! Congrats!!! It sure sounds like one. Love it!!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/29/2019 4:12:00 PM

Ha so glad you enjoyed it G! Would love to see more of yours!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/27/2019 11:57:00 PM

Congratulations Brenda. Well deserved win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/28/2019 1:56:00 AM

Ahhh Caren thank you so much!;)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 2:41:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/28/2019 1:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 1:28:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Brenda :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/25/2019 2:31:00 PM

Anne-Lisa thank you so much!;)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/25/2019 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations Brenda, well derserved. // Barry

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/25/2019 2:31:00 PM

Barry thank you !;)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/25/2019 6:50:00 AM

Very nice, Brenda. Congrats on your win :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/25/2019 8:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Charles!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/24/2019 9:39:00 PM

beautiful...congrats on your win... :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 9:55:00 PM

Thank you Sandy back at ya!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/24/2019 8:28:00 PM

I like the way this moves from the physicality of the 'now' to the eternity of the soul. Congrats on your win, Brenda! :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 9:10:00 PM

Gershon thank you and congrats to you too my friend!;)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2019 8:25:00 PM

another passionate write, congratulations on your win.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thank you Eve as a congrats to you too!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2019 6:08:00 PM

this is beautiful, Brenda. Congrats on your win and merry Xmas eve!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 6:10:00 PM

Merry Christmas and thank you Andrea!;)

Bobby May

Date: 12/24/2019 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement! Brenda, as Dear Heart said enchanting!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 6:09:00 PM

Thank you Bobby!;)

Constance La France

Date: 12/24/2019 11:06:00 AM

Brenda, this is lovely and enchanting !

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 12:47:00 PM

Dear heart thank you so much!;) merry Christmas!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/24/2019 10:31:00 AM

Great penning Brenda, really fine piece with nice touches of romance and sensuality. Have a happy Christmas , Blessings and hugs,Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/24/2019 12:47:00 PM

Thank you so much gordon! ;)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/23/2019 2:49:00 PM

Brenda, I love reading your beautiful poems and all the wonderful comments. There aren't enough hours in the day, though plenty of space in the heart. Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/23/2019 2:56:00 PM

Richard I know what you mean about not enough time in a day! Lol I wish I could comment on more of others work too! It is so disappointing when I can't read like I use to! Thank you so much!;)