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Kissing In the Rain

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This poem was inspired by the contest of my greatest poet and dearest poet sister Linda and the pictures posted on her contest. They're all adorable.

rain’s paean is played with lover’s tender kisses cold breeze sways with grace water on the ground symphony of crystal drops kisses warmth their heart moonlight smiles with glee dark clouds shower them with bliss thunder drums so sweet one heart and one soul unselfishly shield, no fear rain’s concluding hymn May 26, 2013 7pm Note Bueno Haiku 1 is for pictures 1,2 & 3 Haiku 2 is for picture 6 Haiku 3 is for picture 5 Haiku 4 is for pictures 4 and 7 First Place Contest: Kissing In the Rain (Haiku) Judged: 5/27/13 Sponsor: My loving sis & greatest poet, PD/Linda

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2013 9:25:00 PM

Hello My sweetest sister,,, I am so glad to know you took your time ... Just for me.. better yet, I am so so happy of the MAIL... i received today... I wore the pretty jewelry at work... I will keep it close to my heart.. My dearest sis you are by far the sweetest person ever. I have a surprise for you. SOON,... thank you ever so much... hugggggggggssssssssss & kisssssssseeeeeeeessssssssss Leo, .... I'll be back in the morning.... love always~ LINDA

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 9/5/2013 10:06:00 AM

A nice cool Haiku here. I've only written one, so you're teaching me something today -Good Job!!! MC

Ako Henshaw

Date: 7/20/2013 2:14:00 PM

Hi, pretty and vivid says the lines of your poem. I love it.........Henshaw

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/15/2013 9:47:00 PM

Beautiful poetry.- Edward

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/9/2013 7:34:00 AM

Hi..tnks for stopping bye..Its not a payback for you favouriting mine but i do have to favour this chain of beautiful haiku.Haiku is my favourite form..I love it.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2013 3:34:00 PM

I like all of this quartet each beautiful and well written Shadow x

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/1/2013 3:24:00 PM

Hi Leonora, sorry i'm late,, but glad i've seen these wonders congrats

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/1/2013 7:58:00 AM

Beautiful. Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2013 9:24:00 AM

ohh, and cheers to you for a shining win, Leonora...:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2013 7:34:00 AM

You went the extra senual mile in writing your winning contest entry..Congrats...Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/30/2013 6:45:00 AM

Well done,Leo, Congrats on the wonderful win!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2013 1:17:00 PM

oh my, a rich slew of 'kus that shines in its masterful arrangement, leonora... might be in BKK his june!.. thanks for appreciating my piece for your " home" contest..."..:) huggs

Nette Onclaud
Date: 5/29/2013 1:17:00 PM

Congrats!..:)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 12:33:00 PM

Very nicely done. Congrats on your outstanding win friend. AO

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/29/2013 9:16:00 AM

Wonderful series of romantic haiku. Just a reminder that haiku does not have capitals at all. I guess I missed the pictures and this contest. I have been down with the flu for a few weeks and have not been on line much. Congrats on your well deserved win. A nice subject to write on. love phyl

Noel Villarosa

Date: 5/29/2013 4:38:00 AM

Poetic words shine forth. An excellent write and congratulations on your win. Thanks also for my winning to your home contest. (^_^) Noel.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 1:01:00 AM

Congrats to you, Leonora. I particularly liked your last one. That last line is awesome.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/28/2013 7:53:00 PM

Well done Leonora. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest and your kind remarks. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/28/2013 6:25:00 PM

What lovely descriptions !! Well done, Leonora!! And many many thanks for my placement in your "Home" contest!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/28/2013 10:28:00 AM

It's genius one. Wish you grand congratulation on your superb win. Loved always, bl

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/28/2013 9:45:00 AM

Wow!! what can I say? very beautiful poem you wrote my dear friend...very creative..Big big congratulations on your grand win!! you deserve ti..hooray!! love/hugs, Maria

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/28/2013 8:45:00 AM

Hooray for you, Leonora!!!