Len Gasun Poet Haiku

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This poem was inspired by the contest of my greatest poet and dearest poet sister Linda and the pictures posted on her contest. They're all adorable.

Kissing In the Rain

rain’s paean is played
with  lover’s tender kisses
cold breeze sways with grace

water on the ground
symphony of crystal drops
kisses warmth their heart

moonlight smiles with glee
dark clouds shower them with bliss
thunder drums so sweet

one heart and one soul
unselfishly shield, no fear
rain’s concluding hymn

May 26, 2013  7pm



Note Bueno
Haiku 1 is for pictures 1,2 & 3
Haiku 2 is for picture 6
Haiku 3 is for picture 5
Haiku 4 is for pictures 4 and 7

First Place
Contest: Kissing In the Rain (Haiku)
Judged: 5/27/13
Sponsor: My loving sis & greatest poet, PD/Linda

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Poet Destroyer A September 26, 2013 at 9:25 PM Hello My sweetest sister,,, I am so glad to know you took your time ... Just for me.. better yet, I am so so happy of the MAIL... i received today... I wore the pretty jewelry at work... I will keep it close to my heart.. My dearest sis you are by far the sweetest person ever. I have a surprise for you. SOON,... thank you ever so much... hugggggggggssssssssss & kisssssssseeeeeeeessssssssss Leo, .... I'll be back in the morning.... love always~ LINDA

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper September 5, 2013 at 10:06 AM A nice cool Haiku here. I've only written one, so you're teaching me something today -Good Job!!! MC

Ako Henshaw July 20, 2013 at 2:14 PM Hi, pretty and vivid says the lines of your poem. I love it.........Henshaw

Edward Orozco June 15, 2013 at 9:47 PM Beautiful poetry.- Edward

Charmaine Chircop June 9, 2013 at 7:34 AM Hi..tnks for stopping bye..Its not a payback for you favouriting mine but i do have to favour this chain of beautiful haiku.Haiku is my favourite form..I love it.

Shadow Hamilton June 3, 2013 at 3:34 PM I like all of this quartet each beautiful and well written Shadow x

Harry Horsman June 1, 2013 at 3:24 PM Hi Leonora, sorry i'm late,, but glad i've seen these wonders congrats

Monterey Sirak June 1, 2013 at 7:58 AM Beautiful. Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud May 30, 2013 at 9:24 AM ohh, and cheers to you for a shining win, Leonora...:) huggs

Sara Kendrick May 30, 2013 at 7:34 AM You went the extra senual mile in writing your winning contest entry..Congrats...Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 30, 2013 at 6:45 AM Well done,Leo, Congrats on the wonderful win!!

Nette Onclaud May 29, 2013 at 1:17 PM oh my, a rich slew of 'kus that shines in its masterful arrangement, leonora... might be in BKK his june!.. thanks for appreciating my piece for your " home" contest..."..:) huggs Nette Onclaud May 29, 2013 at 1:17 PM Congrats!..:)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 12:33 PM Very nicely done. Congrats on your outstanding win friend. AO

Phyllis Babcock May 29, 2013 at 9:16 AM Wonderful series of romantic haiku. Just a reminder that haiku does not have capitals at all. I guess I missed the pictures and this contest. I have been down with the flu for a few weeks and have not been on line much. Congrats on your well deserved win. A nice subject to write on. love phyl

Noel Villarosa May 29, 2013 at 4:38 AM Poetic words shine forth. An excellent write and congratulations on your win. Thanks also for my winning to your home contest. (^_^) Noel.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:01 AM Congrats to you, Leonora. I particularly liked your last one. That last line is awesome.

Joyce Johnson May 28, 2013 at 7:53 PM Well done Leonora. Thank you for my 4th place in your contest and your kind remarks. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards May 28, 2013 at 6:25 PM What lovely descriptions !! Well done, Leonora!! And many many thanks for my placement in your "Home" contest!!

Bl Devnath May 28, 2013 at 10:28 AM It's genius one. Wish you grand congratulation on your superb win. Loved always, bl

Bukang Liwayway May 28, 2013 at 9:45 AM Wow!! what can I say? very beautiful poem you wrote my dear friend...very creative..Big big congratulations on your grand win!! you deserve ti..hooray!! love/hugs, Maria

Carrie Richards May 28, 2013 at 8:45 AM Hooray for you, Leonora!!!

Mario De Paz May 28, 2013 at 7:21 AM This symphony of cristal drops captures my admiration. Compliments

Donna Jones May 28, 2013 at 7:09 AM Beautiful Leonora...really enjoyed these..congratulations

Judy Konos May 28, 2013 at 5:56 AM Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 1:58 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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